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Endless Sun (deleted)

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Snowin
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If you happen to come across my story, I do hope you can give it a read and let me know what you think! I simply write as a hobby, so please don't expect this to be the Holy bible of writing. If you do happen to give it a read, I hope you enjoy! Thank you

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AlegendRisked
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Starts out very mild but gets drastically better the more I kept reading. Definitely picking up again when volume 2 releases. Very unique story, setting and characters. I’d recommend this to those who are looking for a great action/self development fantasy story with mythological characteristics.

don_offl
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Holy this novel remembers me a choices game i played on mobile Elementalists i've always wanted a full time novel like that game other than harry potter books and ive finally found this. my author persona was punched down by my reader persona,even though the there are some techincal and some grammatical errors here and there one could simply ignore it and enjoy the novel pls resize the paragraphs to make it more smaller author i hate big chunk of para you have awesome story telling abilities and writing skills,ive learned a lot from readings and i need to read it again slowly to enjoy it bit more even the starting chapters seems like fillers it has a good flowing the only thing bothered me is the characters which seemes a little bland until chapter 7. i hope the characters get personalities and feel like real beings in the following chapters. Overall this novel brought my happy memories about fantasy games and books ive read and made me smile. Simply a Great novel

Kenlinvert1
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Kenringdomstorys
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