Reviews of Endless adventure: A Fairy Tail Fanfic
Endless adventure: A Fairy Tail Fanfic
Archer_Phoenix
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another "fanfic" yuri to my list, it is difficult to find "fanfic" of yuri in worlds of known anime, just do not drop it like other authors.
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I've only read upto chapter 4 so excuse me for any ignorance about the character and story progression of future chapters. MC starts out very strong(powerwise) and already has interest in love interest so it just feels like the story progresses way too fast. Plus the MC doesn't have much of a personality (it is only chapter 4 for me). I liked the author's DBZ fanfic more to be honest but this fanfic sadly doesn't have the same quality as that one. I'll edit and correct my review later when I have finished reading the rest of the story.
If this is Yuri, I hope to see how you handle romance, a harem would be interesting, and if you can later look for the way they have children, it would be perfect, keep it up don't fall.. --------------------------------------------------- Many are looking for stories of yuri, whether it be anime or movies, it's hard to find. pdta: yuri xd sect.
Hmm, I hope it's a good yuri, it's the first time I've seen one in the world of fairy tail, author you'll put the yuri tag. ---------------------------------------------------- put a natsu woman, to vary the story, if you have seen the fanhar of google where they put what natsu would look like if she were a woman.
For my good feedback, the story was great and entertaining. Cool take on the powers and phoenix and all. Nice going with the conversations and the back stories. It was a nice take on a chill story. The bad side of it is, this isn't much of an adventure anymore. This would be considered more like a slice of life genre rather than and adventure. The story constitutes more of the characters lives than the adventure itself or the cannon. The use of having goddeses and dragons in keys made no sense with the story so far. It took 53 chapters just to reach the start of the assumed cannon which should have started long ago. Its a good story but having a slice of life story like this with no thrill or setbacks give no spice to the story.
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