Reviews of Endbringer

Ok so I just want to say that this story do be hella pog tho. So author, please keep it up and don't stop writing! Umm, that's all i have to say so have some random words: klrwnqelrknwe

The story is very entertaining, it keeps reminding me of an anime about magic and fantasy. The MC is a boy with an attractive character when you follow his trail while reading and his interactions with the girls around him are endearing and nostalgic, reminiscent of a good harem anime. :)

From the first chapter alone, this is a fun and intriguing book to read! Very good descriptions and I love how it's written in the narrator's point of view instead of 1st person or 3rd person. Thx for recommending your book to me!

A book that reminds one of a light novel, which is honestly not bad considering English is not your first language. From the past to now, I can also see you are actively improving. The majority of grammar errors have cleared up, so kudos to you ! However, here are some of my issues: 1. It is more of my personal opinion, but I feel like the narrator throws me off from immersing myself fully. However, again, this isn’t an entirely big issue as this is your style. 2. Long paragraphs with somewhat lengthy descriptions. Would recommend segmenting them into small portions and scattering them across the chapter so as to not overburden some readers with info dump. 3. Grammar, but I can see it’s gradually improving ! All in all, don’t get discouraged, author ! We all start from somewhere, and I know if you persevere, you will eventually gain what you wish for. Keep it up !

Hey, hey. Great chapters. I tried reading Endbringer before, but at that time, there were some mistakes in the first few chapters so I remember dropping it. But I'm glad to see that you've fixed them for the readers, since I can more easily delve into your novel now. The world building was probably the most interesting part for me, since I could compare the magical World and the modern World. As for the plot and characters, they remind me a lot about the times when I watched anime, so i'm feeling super nostalgic now. :3 Keep up the good work.

I personally like your story. You're writing style match with your story concept. But I like the characters more. Being anime character and all, it got me inspired to put it in my own story. Keep it up!

I haven't had a chance to read much of your story yet but I do like what I've seen so far. Needs some editing but othere then that keep up the good work :)

My dear Author-sama, this isn't a novel, this is a fcking anime and I'm completely invested in it! TAKE MY STONES!!!!! (Next time I will surely give u my stone since I've already used them.) Though, if I had to nitpick, I would advise you to give your first chapters a look-through because sometimes, as you write your chapters, your style changes ever so slight and by a certain point, it might be unrecognizable after a certain point. It also helps in correcting minor grammatical errors and typos. Anyway, have a nice day!!

A mix of fantasy and modern world... I liked the story. The descriptions of places are nice. But I think you could do with some editing. Maybe shortening the sentences or changing the way they are written could help? Good luck with your story. Keep it up :)

The passion and choice of words is so clear. This author really put her soul into this and you can tell. Loved the chapters as they pull you in.

hello author! I love how you describe your story and the development as well! It looks very much like a light novel and I love them especially when they had a little japanese feel. Good job and keep writing!

Honestly, the story reminds me about one of those classic slice of life anime with magic powers and such. Brings me a lot of nostalgia not gonna lie, +1 collection from me Senpai!

I was able to get through a couple of chapters before I started work. I thoroughly enjoy the "storyteller PoV" that you've decided to go with! I will also say that, despite English not being your primary language, you've done a decent job, better even than some native English speakers on the site. Keep up the good work, and stick to that strong anime vibe!

I really like your love for anime and overal style of writing. I only don't like the mistakes. I am not a native speaker but sometimes the sentences sounds weird. But overall great story

The synopsis itself caught my attention hehe! Feels I'm watching anime and feeling myself diving deeper within as I read on... The plotline is well sketched out and the description is striking. I love how you have really thought through such realistic names and places! Good work author san~

I don't typically like novels that have a harem, but I like this one. It's not like the majority of those novels with all girls having the same sort of personality and I also like the premise of the story. Keep it up.

Wow, delve into the world of magic and get transported to a new dimension where everything can be made, fixed and broken with just a chant or a spell. Nice novel! It's like I existed in a new dimension. Interesting characters! Interesting world! What can you ask for? Hood job Author! Keep it up!

The story is well written and planned, I can tell you know where you want it to go. I'd suggest splitting the chapters into more pieces (you can call them like chap1-title (1), chap1-title (2) and so on, and even publish them all together) just to help the readers. I like shorter chapters because sometimes I read on the bus, subway or when I have just five minutes. However, it's a choice for the author, so I guess you have your reasons to keep them together. Essentially, good job!

Amazing storytelling with beautiful descriptions that follow a true character. The author has a real talent for this. Loved reading every word of it! Can't wait for more!