The narration is good but although there are few dialogues. I can understand that there are errors since it is not yet edited nzjkmzmsmkxnsnmskkzkznxnxnzkzkkzmmxmncnkxkzkxmmxjxkx
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Wow, this is good it really is. There are some errors in the spelling and punctuation marks. But damn this story is amazing if it will be continued. The first chapter is already have a nice execution so please continue your work. Your idea is nice enough.