Hi. I'm Jack, your friendly reader. Here's my obligatory 5star review. ❤️ Jack's top 10 (Jan 2020) ❤️ 01) Lord of the Mysteries 02) Way of the Devil 03) The Devil's Cage 04) The Legendary Mechanic 05) Gamers of the Underworld 06) The First Order 07) The City of Terror 08) Reverend Insanity 09) A Sorcerer's Journey 10) Throne of Magical Arcana I'm actually reading more than 20 novels at the moment, but I'm only posting my 10 most favorite ones here.
Well first lets talk about the the novel going premium at the 11th chapter, don't care about that nor will i be biased against it for going premium early. WORLD BUILDING: I'm at chapter 40 and the world is getting introduced as the novel proceeds, it isn't disjointed nor does it have straight chapters with info dumps, so as an orignal it has it's sweet spot all in all better the world building is good. CHARACTER DESIGN: Considering all the web novels i have read our MC has his morals but is not a slave to them and in my opinion he is entitled to his revenge taking his backstory into account, and most importantly he is sane not like some other novels whose MC's have the brain of a 5 yr old soooooooo good mc. And as for the side characters they have their own personality and story meaning they are not one dimensional. STORY: Dont have much to say about the story other than it not being very plot heavy, even a bit lacking but still good. And dont have no qualms about the grammer cause english is my second language, so it's good for me. **: Please be genuine with your ratings and dont skew them in rage of the novel going premium early.
The book needs an editor but otherwise it’s pretty good, I mean I understand people getting mad about the premium thing because I feel that Webnovel does a lot of scummy things so it’s alright to be mad at them. However this author is not webnovel none of the authors are, they are literally just trying to make a living while doing something they love. And of course there are authors that do ****ty things but I don’t believe that this is one of them. Anyways this book is definitely worth a read, the plot is quite good and the main character is quite realistic. Thanks for your hard work mr author Can’t wait for more chapters
I love the story, until a dumb woman who's not at all helpful apart from draining funds from MC and getting kidnapped come into the scene. MC is okay. He's smart. He's got character too and is not a heartless beast. But he turns into a moron because of that certain damnable useless white lotus who has saintly disposition but is still out-and-out a good for nothing.
This novel had the potential to be a great novel but it unfortunately it wasn't able to reach it's full potential and we ended up with a very mediocre novel Characters are boring,story development is bad World building is bad Story progressing is bad and there is many unnecessary stuff in it and it is full of maggufins Power system is bad And the whole novel is bad, a pure waste of time