Reviews of Emperor Mo ling

Such a humble protagonist caught me off guard, usually its some edge lord grinding through the world cultivating, without cultivating their mind. The slow buildup is excellent without any shock value. Keep going and work hard on that grammar.

I can see the story is different from others. The author is trying to define their characters and they are certainly more than one dimensional. The grammar needs a bit more work, but it's doing great for the first few chapters.

since u only have three chapters, i will not judge the book in a negative way. writing quality is good. i want to know more about the characters and more of world background. as of now, everything looks good and promising. keep it up and keep writing ;)

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♡♥♥♥♡♡♡♥♡♡♥♥♡ 🍸🌹🌹🍸🌹🌹🍸 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹 🍸🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🍸 🍸🍸🌹🌹🌹🍸🍸 🍸🍸🍸🌹🍸🍸🍸 🍸🍸🍸🌹🍸🍸🍸 🍸🎁😊❤☺🎁🍸 I hope you will like it it is my first attemp in writing about matirial arts