Isalla
Just from the current 9 chapters that are out, I am in love with this novel. The way you have built up the world is fabulous along with all the emotions. I've read your other book, Soulward, but it did not make me cry as much as this one did. As a trans woman I cried at the ending of Chapter 4: Lifeblood. Thank you for such a wonderful book.
Wow. I loved reading what you have available so far. I look forward to following Alex and Zoey's story. You just gained another fan! You did a wonderful job of transitioning the pronouns as well as the personality of Alex throughout the story. I appreciate your writing capabilities because they are similar to my own. You moved the story in a seamless matter and you are a mature writer, you get deep and I like that. Thank you for putting yourself out there. Writing is personal and many forget that you embed parts of yourself into the worlds and storylines you create. There is always a truth that speaks out when you write and I connected with what you have to offer your audience. Keep up the good work! It is worth so much more.
This story is amazing!! I caught up in one night! I love the characters and detail put into this. tbh I wanna thank you for writing this cause I've been in a depressed funk lately and reading this got me so excited and I felt wonderful! cant wait to read more. it has taken the number one spot for me right now and I've read alot of stories on here but none I've connected with as much as this one.