really bad. 1st time in dungeon he lvls up. author doesn't understand danmachi at all
Very good but ruined danmachi fanfics for me as now whenever I read one I always end up comparing it to this masterpiece and they always come up short. Freya was my favourite character in this story as I could really connect with her and her singlemindedness in trying to achieve her dream. I also loved hefestues coming to terms with her looks and not changing it when she had the chance .
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500 spaces and press enter sadly spaces don't count, so I'll have to say whatever here.... no idea what I am doing really.... I don't know the minimum characters... just found it, it's 140...
This story is AMAZING!!! 100% worth the read! I really mean that, if you like Danmachi, you'll like this. If you don't like Danmachi, you'll still like this.
an excellent read with vivid descriptions and an engaging story. hard to imagine this story has reached this point but i am proud to have witnessed it.
Congratulations my brother, you create an incredible story. I loved following your book, 600 thousand words, 254 chapters, incredible. I look forward to your new projects.
will mc reconcile with his first girlfriend or does he move on?. if so whi does he end up with ▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️▫️
It's starts good but it goes downhill when he goes around telling/showing his stats and skills just because his 'crush' tried to 'seduce' him to show the loki familia his stats sheet. I've only read up to chapter 19 so please tell me which chapter did he improve in his development.
Too fast paced, I read the author review and maybe he is more interested in the unexplored floor inside the dungeon. So he need op mc to blaze it inside, the mc become too op for me. Level 2 just one day, bruh it's only one fight and I thought he'll slowly grow while using his brain to cleverly use his inventory at first and then he is on fire.
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Supongo que la idea del autor era hacer un MC como "Goku, Natsu o Luffy" tal ves, pero las acciones y pensamientos del MC son sin sentido alguno, este puede ser definido como "idiota y arrogante". Las personalidades del resto de los personajes es nula, no se pueden diferenciar pero bueno. Esta es mi opinión pero te recomiendo leerla ya que son mis gustos los que haga que no pueda disfrutarla
💊💉💊💉💊💉💊💊💉💊💉💊💉💊 ⊂二二二( ^ω^)二⊃ FANTASTIC book so far. Somewhat fresh approach to Danmachi ff. Top of my Queue! 💊💉💊💉💊💉💊💊💉💊💉💊💉💊💊💉💊💉💊💉💊💊💉💊💉💊💉💊
mooooaaaarrrrr pls dont drop this i love it so much mooooaaaarrrrr mooooaaaarrrrrmooooaaaarrrrrmooooaaaarrrrrmooooaaaarrrrrmooooaaaarrrrrmooooaaaarrrrr
very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
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You got two fics and each one of them got an average of over 4.5 stars. I want to help you get 5 star rating one every one of your story so here you go
its amazing cant wait for new chapter 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
please make a HAREM please make a HAREM please make a HAREM please make a HAREM please make a HAREM please make a HAREM please make a HAREM
Love the story so far <3