Elder Scrolls: Naruto

Updates? Man when will the Haitsu be over, few week have turned in few months. Still like a fool I am waiting for this Novel updates. Need more Chapters! and the Haitsu. Need more Chapters! and the Haitsu. Need more Chapters! and the Haitsu. Need more Chapters! and the Haitsu. Need more Chapters! and the Haitsu. Need more Chapters! and the Haitsu Need more Chapters! and the Haitsu. Need more Chapters! and the Haitsu. Need more Chapters! and the Haitsu

Poorly written story with a lot of inconsistencies. It's a fan-fiction, yet the author can't even follow the structure of the world their story is in, then again it's fan-fiction. One of the worst reads on the site.

He is five year old ejaculating....Yup this is just like anyother fanfic. I even skip some chapters hoping the author did a time skip and the MC is a least 11 year old. I love Skyrim and naruto...this had so much potential but it not for me.

Myumara and I had a debate on fanfic vs original a few days ago. I've never read fanfic before, so I decided to check out his work since I'm a Naruto fan anyways. I've currently read 24 chapters and I'm very impressed. This novel is its own story and world. I don't think calling it fanfic does it justice, as the quality is very high. I think most people could enjoy it with very little understanding of Naruto. Since this is the 1st fanfic I've ever read I don't know what bad fanfic looks like, but I definetly know what good fanfic looks like and this is it! I highly recommend this novel! Writing Quality: 5/5. A few ocassional misspelled words, but rare and still understandable. Updates: Dunno. New reader so I assume they're frequent? Story development: 5/5. I don't remember all the events of Naruto, so some things aren't clear to me, but its easy to follow along with the gist of whats happening. I ocasionally google a character to see their appearence. Character Design: 5/5. MC is a crazy weeaboo psychopath I enjoy reading about. Side characters don't seem to be neglected so far. World background: 5/5. Honestly, this is what makes the novel. I felt like I was diving into the mist village and learning all about it. A whole new area of Naruto we know little about. If the author had ended up sending MC to Konoha village, then I'd probably have gotten bored and quit reading. Instead, I can't wait to read the next chapter. I look forward to catching up when I have time. Final thought: The real author of Naruto should have made the sequel in another village like this instead of Naruto Jr. Please forgive any spelling mistakes in my review. Wrote this on mobile.

Waiting for the next update of this work. I think i am really become addicted with this novel. For me this novel is interesting and have a lot potential.

First of all keep in mind this is a fanfic so if you are not into naruto some things might be unfamiliar to you. Now with that out of the way, the author is really skilled. He takes a different approach to most fanfics I have read and keeps you engaged into the story. There are a lot of twists and unexpection actions that the MC takes that you wouldn't expect at all if you know anything about naruto. Yet it all fits so well into the world setting and nothing really feels out of place. The author definitely did his research into naruto before writing about certain things as I haven't found anything that seems to be conflicting with the world of naruto I know and he even makes use of this information to let his creativity flow into new plots. I definitely recommend this novel.

Tapping the untapped potential hidden in the naruto series. Wonder how high samehada can evolve. Maybe it will become a new shark tales beast. Or become a nature chakra beast like the summons.

My favorite Naruto fanfic. Just love how the MC chose Kirigakure to start instead of Konoha. Good job! ..............................................

One of the most interesting fan-fic. Overall quality is too good, the plot as well as the story progress will not keep you bored. Keeping me excited for every updates. Keep it up!

I am really impressed. The story is developing very well. Not too fast, not too slow. the MC is not too OP, but also not too weak. I really LIKE your work. Thanks for this interesting novel. Hope you can keep this work up till the end.

Great story and not very cliche storyline. Good job author ...................................... ....... ..... .... ..... ...... ..... .... .... .... .... .... ... .. .. .. .. ... .. . .... .... .. .. ..

When I wrote a review I don't use technical or critical basis, as long as I like and enjoys the novel I don't mind giving a 5star to a show my appreciation and support for the author. I leave those complicated basis to the expert, so don't mind me it's only my opinion.

I like this type MC, Shameless, not Sully. Well general plot story' OK. Keep going your write. I fell this story' make really like original story' Naruto but MC side caracter. May i have add this question. I don't know how exactly age this MC?

Nice story, i like the character, a lot better than other naruto fan fiction ------------------------------------------------------ pls get new cover for better impression

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Well u get ur chap steady so why not give u better review, so story go really well mc blend with naruto universe but ill wait for konoha stage cuz its so troublesome there

Brilliant Story and an equally good translation The naruto world Was well written and had a new feel to it The characters are well fleshed out although they could use some improvements The relationship Was a little weird but if it works it works Overall not a great story but a brilliant work by the author all the same.

Ignored this for a while because of too much naruto fanfic here. not until I saw it in the top 10's which after I read deserves it. the first few chapter is a bit doozy in it. but after that, the immersion in the story is good. Also, this OC fanfic is much better than others who always use the same things and events. GJ Author. keep it up!