MrSunni
The story started fairly good if you look past the bad grammar, but it started going downhill when Author decided to force a "tragedy" on the MC... I’m gonna spare you the details and just say that it turned out to be a complete waste of time, power levels are all over the place (Ophis is a weakling compared to MC, but he gets his as.a handed to him in his first main battle), and characters act completely out of character. So yeah enough said, don’t waste your time!
All i can say is sh!t im out of this stup!d novel no power rankings what so ever just say mc is as strong as ophis then out of nowhere bham damn author just make mc like an ant easily squish even early chapters the story is so f*cking emo low update speed and story is just like the fall of grim fanfic put OP MC in other perspective yet weak as ant compare to antagonist. Story keep jumping from place to place azazel was fighting michael and sirz ech then escape nxt instant leave trouble to mc next leave from who knows where planet the damn crow hide then switch again to another place the damn trio looks like best friends that will even share their own woman to each other. DONT BOTHER READING THE FANFIC U WILL ONLY GET CANCER READING!!!!!
It was decent at best then he had somebody ophis and big red level get destroyed by somebody who would have a reason to kill the other two yet they won't. Not only that but the mc the guy at ophis and big reds level has been training his fucking hardest his entire life then somebody with a dragon on the same level and younger who trained yes all her life too but she would have maybe the same constitution as mc at best but could still train harder than him TF? Like then you said Tiamat trained her harder. I'm fucking sorry but why the **** wouldn't bahamut if he knew this might happen?!?!
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