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#_# DXD fanfiction / VALI LUCIFER #_#

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DXD FANFICTION where the protagonist is reborn as Valí Lucifer like my other story this one won't follow cannon so much and I will add some comedy and OG characters sacred gears plot . this is a fictional work made for fun

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Chapter 1CHAPTER 1

huh?

how the heck did he slap a truck?

i mean i was trying to stop the Truck before i hit him but he ran towards the truck and slapped it... HE SLAPPED THE DAMN TRUCK AND I WAS IN THE TRUCK!!

HOW TE FUCK DO YOU SLAP A TRUCK AWAY???

anyways i should be dead or all this crap is some crazy dream ...

probably te neighbors downstairs were smoking marijuana again and it slipped into my bedroom again ...

nah

anyway were am i ??

last time I had one of those dreams i saw John Cena doing his iconic" you can't see me" while doing what looked like saitama's sidestep move ....

around Gaara .....

during the damn chunnin exams...

well I'm in some kind of colorfull place like those screensavers were all the colors just float around and mix and all that ...

guess they really are smoking again....

hoh now everything is shifting? like a spiral?

and it's pulling me in?

wait I'm getting sleepy and...ZZZZ

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"indeed she is pregnant Razevan Lucifer-sama" servant

" tsk a halfbreed" Razevan Lucifer

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...

I'm so screwed... if my memory serves me right that guy was vali's father right?

in fact that would mean i could be valí Lucifer that guy has some sick potential .... and a shity childhood hope I'm not his brother or something....

anyway if I'm right and I'm in DXD then i have to get this crazy bastard to not beat the heck out of me because of his inferiority complex...

so i have to convince the madman of my father and his even crazier father...

and stop em from hitting mom too...

how do I fucking do THAT??!?

also I'm already four months old dude do you have to get the damn servant to check every 3 damn days? i mean come on!!

poor servant sucks to be him ....

though it probably sucks to be me more...

also apparently next month he will check if i start showing signs of possesing the clans power , cause i have tons of demonic power befitting my status as a descendant of Lucifer .

also from what I've heard from the doctor/servant/mage?? at the 5th month is the earliest that a devil baby starts showing signs of possesing their clan's signature power though it's rare since normally it happens shortly before or after birth and in rare cases till they are older.

though this just shows they posses said power not that they can use it.

so perhaps he hasn't decided of getting rid of me because he wants to know if i have that potential??

then when he finds out that i have a sacred gear and Wich one it is he'll lose it ....

though i guess this mage/servant isn't good at that type of magic? so he can't find out? perhaps the fact that Rizevimu ain't here for the past months is the reason since he only left this guy and some random servants from what I can tell from between my naps.

speaking of na..zzzzzz

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Have read 5 chapters. So here is my review based on that. Writing Quality - 4/5 - Pretty good writing quality. Better than Chinese MTL which I would have rated 3/5. Story Development - 3/5 - The MC is still in the womb and is ranting to himself about anything in dxd in general. His quirkiness is kinda sad, it's like he has gone nuts due to loneliness or something. He is able to to listen to what's happening outside the womb when he is a foetus, I am not sure if that is even possible normally, even for 3/4th devil. The story literally has not started developing at all by this point so 3/5. Character Design - 3/5 - The character of MC cannot be assessed as all he's done uptil now is rant in his mind about who he is going to get in his peerage, how he is going to awaken paternal feelings in his father, how he will reach Grigori and get Azazel to adopt him. All things cliché and sticking to known variables. Not good, not bad. The MC's father is questionable, seems as if he is in love with MC's mother but is putting up a facade infront of Rizevim and other servants, don't know if this personality would continue post MC's birth. Updating Stability - 4/5 - This is always unknown. The Author may continue with good stability in the beginning but sooner or later would either drop it or hiatus it. Questionable, thus 4/5 for current update stability. World Background - 5/5 - It's DxD, literally can fit any myth and has tons of potential. Just don't know whether the Author is able to unearth it. Overall - 3.8/5.0 - Well, Not the best fic but not the worst either. Hope the story gets better with time. Good luck Author 👍.

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