Reviews of Dudley Dursley and the Diabolical Do-Over (Harry Potter)

was interesting at the start than he kinda turns into a degenerate unintelligent every holes a goal kinda thing and the last chapter just kinda ruined it for me not a fan that your a cuck 4/10 some people enjoy that stuff tho so to eaches own

Just giving the author some support, it’s the first time seeing a Harry Potter fanfic where the mc is Dudley, so keep going

honestly with taking Harry's magic it kind of ruined it for me since there's no real reason reason the antagonism behind everything at that point. then again very few potterverse fan fics ever turn out well for one reason or another so I'll go back tomeaiting on dxd fan fics or something

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So 3 years for Dudley so far... or rather 3 books. An amusing thing is that this is basically a Return/Rebirth type story with a "villain" type who is suppressing the original "hero protagonist", a fanon harem master Harry Potter.

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Ha. Poor hermione. Lol. Great story so far. Ha. Poor hermione. Lol. Great story so far.Ha. Poor hermione. Lol. Great story so far.Ha. Poor hermione. Lol. Great story so far.

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So good. Omg. Ha ha. Poor hermione. Naive girl. Excited for more. So good. Omg. Ha ha. Poor hermione. Naive girl.So good. Omg. Ha ha. Poor hermione. Naive girl.

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