ShadowsFinger
Ok, so I've added tags and I'm waiting for the mass of chapters I uploaded to show up the system here on qidan I'm not used to it yet. It seems the chapters are set to post a day after they are uploaded. This is my very first novel ever I'm a digital artist with a background in programming and so I won't be the best writer out there but I hope it will be entertaining for you guys as I'm having fun experiencing this new field of interest.
I will give you five stars for now just for the fun of it..... you have started properly and u have got our attention, but if u think ur story has started am sorry my guy(or girl?) ,your story will start when u finish this arc for the talent selection because that’s were we now see if your mediocre or you have got talent . We have to see how well you built up the characters and the world .. I honestly hope ur not one of those authors who only repeat fights and competitions only one a large scale and hope to pass it off like your actually writing (when I mean is from going from talent competitions to sect competition to other sects competing against each other u know the repetitive fights with no substance)am only saying thing much because dude I really look forward to reading your book and hope it becomes more amazing as u continue..............so yah keep it up .....and one last thing what’s the chapter release like?
Ok, So I've re-edited the spelling errors and some grammar issues that I had before throughout the novel both on the website and the book. So far I'm not sure if there is anymore that are still remaining that I cant see. Feel free to point them out to me if you come across any and I'll do my best to clean them up and make the series less straining to read. I will be careful with the chapters from further on also book 2 is starting today I'll try to do 2 chapters but it will depend on how my job goes if not ill upload 1. So yeah thanks for reading and once again thanks for your interest in the series. If you like the series and want to offer your support an Amazon Kindle Version of Book 1 Is Now Available Check Link Below: https://read.amazon.com/kp/embed?asin=B07C7912KX&preview=newtab&linkCode=kpe&ref_=cm_sw_r_kb_dp_S8q1AbGW4XXKY
Okay, so I really think this novel has a lot of potential. And if you did not state that it was your first novel, I can assure you that most people won't notice. And I also like the fact the mc was not at the peak of martial arts in his previous world and he get a do-over. And I would advise you to try to make your story believable and also in the attempt to make the novel "different " from other novels PLEASE and PLEASE don't spoil the novel for us that are really really beginning to be fans of yours.
**** where the hell is the chapters why there is only 17? ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................