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Great Start!!! Keep it going !!! This is going to be good !!! Thank You !!!!!!!!! Great Start!!! Keep it going !!! This is going to be good !!! Thank You !!!!!!!!! Great Start!!! Keep it going !!! This is going to be good !!! Thank You !!!!!!!!! Great Start!!! Keep it going !!! This is going to be good !!! Thank You !!!!!!!!! Great Start!!! Keep it going !!! This is going to be good !!! Thank You !!!!!!!!! Great Start!!! Keep it going !!! This is going to be good !!! Thank You !!!!!!!!! Great Start!!! Keep it going !!! This is going to be good !!! Thank You !!!!!!!!!
Its good and all, but author should get a editor or a proofreader. Words are often miss spelled and some words are missing that reading a paragraph is kinda confusing sometimes. Especially for a reader that only watch a couple of seasons that a sentence with a misspeled or a missing word can be super confusing. Its kinda ok at the beginning, but after ch 9. With the mess fast phase and no proper time skip(author only say ‘couple of months, couple of days’ that its confusing if a yr has past or why) combines with the misspelled and missing words. I become fedup with it that the story become allover the place to me.
It feel like the author have not set out any kind of a road map before he wrote the story, so it feel all over the place. As an avid reader of "Game of Thrones" this story timeline confused me to no end. The story itself is not too bad, wish fulfillment mosly....the only complaint for me is that the MC doesn't play it smart...he have magic but instead of keeping it as a hidden cards....he boasting it to the public instead.