2 In the Past with sex System??

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Aiden stares at the screen completely frozen in his place. His mind stopped working and his eyes fixed on the Date that was 19-02-2020 which should not be possible.

A voice echoes in his mind pulling him out of his thoughts.

He looks up from his phone and a floating semi-transparent Pink screen appeared in front of him with red words written on it.

[Ding! System Initialising.]

[System has fused with the host.]

As though dazed and looking into the void, Aiden appeared to be staring at nothing. And dazed he was, as a new string of words appeared before him like they were being typed on the monitor that was space itself.

[Welcome! You have been chosen as the Beta Tester and the host of The Ultimate Sex System.]

[Host may access the system panel when you wish to do so.]

"Wait. What. The. Fuck! What The Fuck is going on here" He couldn't help but curse loudly, as the endless notification of system text flitted across his vision.

"How I am still alive and even if I am alive then why I am in 2020 and not in 20..." Aiden took a moment to see the screen floating in front of him "What the hell is the Beta tester of the Sex system?"

Aiden calms down and slaps his both cheeks "Alright one step at a time, one by one" he told himself again and again.

Aiden quickly remembered the system message that had appeared some mins ago before him reminding him to access the system panel.

[Ding! The Host has a mail from the creator.]

But before he could say or ask anything about his system one more text appeared before his eyes, Freezing him in his place.

He knew what the system is, but he was shocked to his core as he saw the system notification. From all the novels, He knew what a system entailed, and the unimaginable cheat-like powers main characters gained from their systems after having read several isekai novels in his past life.

"Ok, System do you have a system assistant like those novels or Any type of A.I. tech?" As soon as he finished saying a ball of light appeared in front of him just as it was waiting for him to ask this question.

"Ahhh" He jumps back in shock and falls off the bed. "Ouch, it hurt," He said as he while rubbing his back.

"Hehehe" Sound of a girl giggling comes from the light and the lights start to dim soon a figure can be seen slowly coming out of the light ball.

A small but beautiful Girl with Shiny seven-colored rainbow butterfly wings and blue hair appears from it. Her height was only 5 inches maximum.

"Damn you shouldn't scare people like this," he said to the little girl with wings

Hearing his words the little fairy laughed. Then the beautiful girl looking like a fairy comes in front of his face with a huge smile on her face and circles around him.

"hehe sorry I just wanted to surprise you so that's why it happen, I promise I will try not to do it again" The Little Fairy apologized to Aiden and show him a cute smile.

Aiden stood up from the ground and sat on the bed while looking at the Fairy "Stop laughing it's not funny" said to her in an annoyed tone "Now can you explain what's going on?"

Fairy giggled more "Hehe I also don't know what's going on" Hearing her laughing made him more annoyed but before can say anything to her she continued "You should check your system mail to find out what happened, You know how the system works right?"

Aiden nods and said to the system "System show me mail" After reading all those novels if he didn't know how to operate the system then it's better to die with shame.

[Ding! The host has one Mail]

"Open It" Aiden commands again.

[Ding Opening mail from creator ]

[Hello, I am the creator of the system also Known as Goddess of Inventions, This system is one of my creations. But before I can give it to a 'Hero' I wanted to test it so I can know if there are any problems or what can i change in the system. I was looking for a candidate when saw your soul going into the cycle of rebirth and I randomly pick some souls, from all of them you are the best one.

I take a look at your life and read your memories and I found you a good candidate for testing My System.

There were a few conditions that has to be matched to be a candidate.

1 Host must be a male.

2 There should be many women in his life that love him and he can use the system on them.

3 He must be able to use the system properly and give me feedback

4 He must not be an Evil person

5 He must not change the world drastically (destroying your planet, enslaving all women, attacking the countries, and such things)

You matched my conditions perfectly plus I like your life and found it very good you can use this system on women around you and you can also live a good life this time and won't have regrets like before.

I used one of my creations and put your soul back into your body and I put it in your past body due so you can have some advantages, this is also a perfect time where you can enjoy your life to the fullest.

I have Attached my Assistant the little girl to your system so she can help you. The system will be with you until you die again so don't worry about me taking your system away, I am warning you If you don't treat her well and do anything bad to her, I will kill you myself and make sure you feel pain for 100s of eons.

You can use the system to do whatever you want but don't do anything that will affect your whole planet Drastically.

I am also giving you some gifts use them and live your life completely also give feedback if there are any errors or if the system can be improved in any way.

Goddess of Inventions]

[Ding Host has received a gift pack from The Creator]

Aiden fell back on his bed and laid down after reading the message of the Goddess of Inventions, A real God he never believed in Gods but now after seeing this message, he started to believe in it. more shocking was that he was reincarnated in the past with a system as Beta Tester and he can use it freely to do whatever he wants he smiles thinking about it.

He looks at the little girl who was flying around in his room like a curious little kid. He called out for her "Hmm? Hello?"

Hearing her name she turns to the source of the voice and looks at smiling Aiden, she smiled as well, "Hello, I am your Assistant from now on, did you read the mail?" he nods and she flys towards him as she continues "Nice, So what do you want to do now?".

He sits properly on the bed and stares at her "I want you to explain the system to me"

But he saw Rem pouting which confused him "What happened to you? Why are you pouting?" he asked her.

She stares at him "You should say 'please' when you ask for something" Her reply made him laugh.

"Ohh Little girl, you are so cute," He said to her looking at her cute little face.

"Don't call me Little Girl" she said angrily.

"Ok, Miss will you please explain the system to me about its functions" Hearing him, She smiled proudly like she did something good.

" Okay since you asked so polity I will answer your question " She snapped her fingers and the screen in front of Aiden changed.

[ Status Missions Shop]

"As you can there are three main Features of the system

1st Status: where you can see your status, skill, title, and other things

2nd Mission: This is where your ongoing mission will be shown

3rd Shop: from the shop, you can buy almost everything you need and want at the cost of SP" She explained the basics of the system to him like a teacher teaching a kid.

Aiden nodded at her "So I can just open my status by saying status and the same goes for others as I did with mail" She nods her small head smiling and said, "You can just think about it in your mind too, You don't have to say it out loud as you won't want people to think you are crazy talking to the air, Right?".

Aiden smiled and said in his mind 'So I can just communicate with you like this too?'.

She replies to him "Yes you can" but she says it out loud instead of in her mind, "But I can talk with you normally as no one can see or hear me other than you''.

"Let's start with my status first then talk more," Aiden said to her.

"Yes just say Status I want to see your status too," She told him to open his status screen.

"Status" He called out to his Status screen.

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