Reviews of Dropped : Reincarnated As Kuroko
Dropped : Reincarnated As Kuroko
AndikaIndra
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It's too forced bro....You have a good concept it's just that things happens to fast.. Increase the character interactions...Many author forced their ways through an events..Including me...take your time..This is your novel....
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-grammar 3/10 -story development 0/10, it was so confusing I don’t know what the fck was going on. Good concept but the author didn’t execute it properly. -MC 0/10 another one of those mc who was transported with cheat, he was a neet in his past life, no experience whatsoever but he just killed without any remorse. No no no, he’s not ruthless, he just don’t react in everything. Especially the side characters, they’re so bad, there’s no reaction when they saw kuroko kill so many people in front of them. Kuroko himself is a sht character, he didn’t even explain why he didn’t feel remorse for killing people -story 1/10 the author just went and write novel without planning, he didn’t even explain what the system does and every chapter was confusing as hell, next chapter kuroko was in a plane killing people, then next he’s in the land fighting with robots without any explanation how he get there, then next Sousouke or whatever his name is was making love with another side character, he’s not even the mc but he has appeared more in the story than the mc. If you expect matured and reasonable mc, then this might not be for you. He’s not matured even tho he kills people, in short don’t expect something good in this novel
So promising yet, it falls short, mostly because 60% of your novel is about Canon Full Metal Panic which people who read/watched already knows with a little bit of Kuroko's cameo. Also your character Kuroko(Ryu) is a college and he feels nothing from killing......mostly he is so bland and his development seems rushed, as an author you have the rights to take your time and plan your characters developments. I perfer quality over quantity. By the way, too much crossovers can be pretty chaotic and can make the World unstable. I very much like the idea you introduced so i hope you can improve your skills in your future works. From a passing fan. P.S I never wrote such long review before LuL.
great at first few chapters but when the story got to much full metal panic it just turns to ****.. great at first few chapters but when the story got to much full metal panic it just turns to ****.. great at first few chapters but when the story got to much full metal panic it just turns to ****.. great at first few chapters but when the story got to much full metal panic it just turns to ****..
80%+ ( around 40-50 chapters)of the chapters are not related to Kuroko nor Kuroko No Basketball. Kuroko only appears as the MC from chapters 1-8 after that the story is a complete copy paste from Full Metal Panic Anime with Sahara Sousuke and Kaname Chidori as the MCs. I repeat, this is not an FF but a complete copy paste from Full Metal Panic anime. The Kuroko from the title is not the MC.
Seriously good, but then author go and decide to add POV of other ML (Full Metal Panic's ML). That destroy the story. There is no need to do that, it is unnecessary. People won't even care what happen to other ML, what we did care is the real ML (Tetsuya Kuroko) everyone else should go to hell, I don't even care.