sparka
I like that Jace is such an overpowering MC. I don't know much about baseball, but to keep it short, I've been staying up until late at night for the past two days, just googling basic information about baseball. This is all very interesting, and I look forward to future releases! Can't wait to read more of the fascinating things you'll write! Keep up the good work! I support you!ππ
πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππββββπβππ
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
This is a review of the first three chapters. The story is a mashup of a baseball and cultivation story. The main character(?), Jace, is a very old ninja assassin/cultivator who is reborn into a different world. In his new life, he is adopted into a baseball obsessed family. The story is interesting but the grammar is bad. There are many run-on sentences and problems with inconsistent verb tense. The author needs an editor. Overall, the story itself is promising but poor grammar brings this story down.