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Read dropped no time to write and no inspiration sorry novel written by the author sparka on Webnovel, This serial novel genre is Competitive Sports stories, ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved
I like that Jace is such an overpowering MC. I don't know much about baseball, but to keep it short, I've been staying up until late at night for the past two days, just googling basic information about baseball. This is all very interesting, and I look forward to future releases! Can't wait to read more of the fascinating things you'll write! Keep up the good work! I support you!😉👍
Jace as a MC is a little overpowered however he still does have his human side in his love of his adopted brother. I think this story is developing a good way. English is not the authors fist language and that does come across however the story is still understandable and good to read.
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This is a review of the first three chapters. The story is a mashup of a baseball and cultivation story. The main character(?), Jace, is a very old ninja assassin/cultivator who is reborn into a different world. In his new life, he is adopted into a baseball obsessed family. The story is interesting but the grammar is bad. There are many run-on sentences and problems with inconsistent verb tense. The author needs an editor. Overall, the story itself is promising but poor grammar brings this story down.