Doragon
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Actual review: Writing quality--> There isn't much to be said about it. It is below average and quite bland. No variety of words, super long run-on sentences, which sometimes even extend a paragraph long! Almost seems like the author didn't want to put an effort in to the story. Stability of Updates--> I'm not sure how long this story has been out for but I know that it is quite inconsistent with updates. Story Development--> There is a decent plot but it seems the only thing the plot revolves around is *** and ***** themes. Which I am fine with but there is literally nothing else in here besides that. I mean there are 11 chapters and barely any plot, barely any development of characters personality, and very predictable plot. One last thing to mention is that the author asks for P.atreon donations and even giving early access to chapters on the platform. I mean COME ON! There are already inconsistent updates and even after that your putting other chapters behind a pay wall?!?! Well, those are just my thoughts...
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