Wow the concept of story looks cool its very awesome store i would definately reccomend it to every one,it is very amazing story every one should read it
This is way beyond our imagination,cool story,at the start i havr many questions about hero,but at the end i realised that secrets will be revealed as the story go forward
I loved the story,i can sense that the real start of the story will be amazing but this is just the begging so keep it up,and you have done impressive work as a begginer