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* Read * Before you start reading I want to say that this is my opinion about what a dragon is, it is not to criticize the story because I have not even read it. *Read* As I understand it, a dragon is a race that is innately powerful. 1.-The weight of a dragon is already equivalent to tons and they already move better than a baby that only half moves not only because it does not have the strength, but because it does not have the various parts of the body developed, something with which that a dragon is already born. One of the ways he shows you that the difference in talent, strength, speed etc compared to a human is like comparing heaven and earth. 2.-The speed at which a dragon gains power compared to a human is 1: 100; It takes 1 year for the dragon to gain strength which is equivalent to 100 years of training for a human. An example of this is Hyoudou Issei from high school dxd. In just 1 year she was already busting even the maous' butts. 3.-Do you really want to know more when it is already known that dragons are the pinnacle of races? it isn't, you say; Why are there even stories in real life or fiction of dragons murdering gods etc.? is not sufficient?; because there are stories either in fiction or real that say that a hero who needed armor, swords, the blessing of gods or goddesses, rituals etc, just to defeat a dragon that is powerful by itself without having a borrowed power or external.? ...and, what you say?
a book that does not deserve the rating it has but got that rating due to some shits spamming reviews with five stars for people with no life they may like to read this novel as like mc they are stupid who will make reductant wishes. 2-3 wishes were simply wasted. MC is a dragon but strength wise is just above average human who trains hard( earth). too many plotholes and no character development. I even feel from this writing .that writer does not understand the content he used to make this fanfic otherwise it would be not so filled of plotholes.
Didn't really get that far, I was trying to because I was bored...but wasn't able to stand it no more, soooo Peace Out! Why I wasn't able to? Simple really, MC = Luffy when it came to adventuring, he goes to where luffy went basically(beating the same people luffy had overcome in the original), the only difference is instead of luffy it's our FF MC, he pick up girls so fast probably faster than the flash running towards him to ask how to pick up girls. Simple minded people probably wouldn't mind this, well I might be wrong there but *shrugs* who cares, I don't. Anyway long story short, It's 1 of the WORST fanfic to read out there, and there's A LOT of them.
Can i ask something hehe the mc is 10 ft tall and the tallest beautiful woman on one piece or atleast those that are recognized or popular are hancock standing at 6.4 ft now can you tell me how does your r 18 scene happen when just for example nojico and nami has the same height they only are standing on 5.7 ft now tell how does a *** scene look like when his *** partner height only reach his waist it fucking look like a man hving *** with a child damn it
A complete 5-Star Novel for me! It has everything you could wish for and more .... The World is One Piece so no complaining there ;) His wishes are good as well and I don't Think he could wish for anything better considering that he had a Limit. Well, all in all, just try it, it is Worth it and I don't Think you'll be dissapointed . AN: Please don't drop this Story so early. I know it is unlikly to see finished Stories but at least the One Piece World, that's all I ask for.π₯Ί If you decide to write more because you have the motivation to, than please do that ...but don't drop it before the One Piece Arc is finished because I see a lot of Potential here ;) Also, I am sorry for any grammar mistakes or for any wrong spelling (* I am not a Native Sneaker, I live in Germany and I do not prove read what I write so.....I hope is is understandable ππ) Please have fun while writing so that I have a lot to read πππ€π€π€π€ͺ
Honestly, I find how he gets girls a little TOO easy but I get it, its just that kind of story. Otherwise about how the mc is too weak for being a dragon... I actually couldent care less about that, and I find him pretty strong anyways. Romance is 2D as all of these types of wish fufillment storys are, women have so little charecter and sometimes are just there to have *** with. Overall, I enjoy this novel, 8/10