Inner Section (2)

Uhhh...500 words but ok here the rest...

I did the commas as you requested...pls comment and review, and of course pls enjoy this chapter! And oh I also fixed some minor errors...but this chapter is....kinda you know...pls don't hare me for it...

Should i d-! What...is this feeling...I feel like something or someone is watching me...Feng Yuan stopped thinking because it felt a weird and something else gaze starting at it...

"Come out! Whoever you are!" yelled Feng Yuan as it looks around to see any changes.

"Heehee" a perverted laughter came from a bush. Feng Yuan turn to look at where it came from, out of the bush appear a giant(50 ft) green and orange color snake with two yellow eyes starting at its color with a lewd hiss...( D:)

"What do you want!" Feng Yuan said coldly because it can fell ill intentions from him.

"What I want? Teehee isn't that obvious! I want your body! I want you to be my wife!" rely the green and orange color snake lewdly as he stares at Feng Yuan slender and small body with his lustful eyes whole thinking: 'She' looks so small and tender to eat(Not literally eating but...you know what I mean...) and beautiful on top of that...I wonder what it feels likes inside of her...will my 'little brother' b-***********(Pls no describe or me get ban...D: ) and this though make him more lustful and the desire to eat this little flower more than ever! (Pls kill me I did I write this!)

The green and orange snake didn't notice his 'little brother' is rising and expanding from a 'certain' area but Feng Yuan did...even though it never saw the world yet...she still got the information from the memory transfer, therefore, she knew what that 'little brother' do and what it rising up and becoming bigger meant...

Feng Yuan look at the green and orange snake with disgust and killing intent with its eyes.

"System...what that snake cultivation realm...analyze him also."

"Host, he Is at the body infusing 4th realm with his strength being normal, his specialty is a poison that comes from his body which is also low-level normal effect poison." rely the system.

"Well time to kill him..." as Feng Yuan slowly slither toward the giant snake.

"Haha! Have you fallen in my handsomeness? Haha! Now come over to daddy and I will make you fly toward the heavens(Doesn't literally mean fly toward heavens...well I mean you all know what this means...don't explain...) as the giant snake look at Feng Yuan with his eyes full of lust and desire to 'duck(You know what this is...)' 'her' but little did he know this 'flower' doesn't even have a gender yet not to mention it private parts...and also it was thinking of killing him...

When Feng Yuan reaches only 3 feet away from the giant snake and, the giant snake lift his tail and show Feng Yuan his 'little brother' in front of it face 3 inches away while saying, "Come over and lick this daddy 'little brother' with your small mouth." Feng Yuan looking at the 'thing' before it which is by the way almost 1.5x bigger than it body height...and 4x wider and 'thicker' than its own body...Feng Yuan look at it with disgust and killing intent and was thinking of how to ***********(Pls no...).

But the giant snake which never notices this because of his 'little brother' blocking his view...was impatient so he says "Hurry! I can't hold myself any longer so if you want don't experience 'that' firsthand then do put my 'little brother' inside of your mouth now!".

Well if you want this so impatiently then I guess I have to 'do' it then! Completely clueless of what going on behind his 'little brother' he doesn't even have the time to react before he felt the most painful experiences he has ever had in his entire life! He then looks at his 'thing' which look to be seen to have a tiny and white needle through his 'thing' but...it not over yet as the 'needle' disappear and quickly slash his 'thing' causing his 'thing' to be cut...he watches as his 'thing' break apart from, his body and fell down to the floor bouncing slightly with blood spilling from the wound...

He felt like his whole world have ended when his 'little brother' has been separated from his body...forever and ever...but then he realized who the culprit of this he quickly became crazy mad and angry as he roared loudly as he looks around the surrounds to find the one who did this to him "You 'slot(...you knows...)' I will kill you! I will torture you! I will-!".

The big snake can never complete his sentence because he felt a cold feeling on top of his head and as his eye look up, he saw a beautiful small snow white snake with 'her' tell halfway through his head which is currently inside his brain...and he was about to say something but later died...

"Congratulations to host "Feng Yuan" on killing a Body infusing 4th realm. Acquired 1,750 experience points. Acquired 35 blood essences."

"Since host "Feng Yuan" have killed a being that is 3 realms higher than the host, host get a 3% more experience points and blood essences."

"Destiny Star Fragment(3rd fragment) effect activate, effect: increase experience points gain by 2.5x."

"Congratulations to host "Feng Yuan" on killing a Body infusing 4th realm. Acquired 4,427.5 bonus experience points...estimating total amount...4,428 experience points. Acquired 36.05 blood essences...estimating amount...36 blood essences."

"Congratulation to host "Feng Yuan" for gaining a level. The current cultivation is Body infusing realm 2nd realm."

The entire time this process was happening the System was silent while thinking if I condense a mortal body...and I ******(the 'e' word...you know what I mean) in front of 'her' will the fate of my 'thing' be the same as his...thinking about this the System felt a cold chills on his back...

"Congratulations to host "Feng Yuan" on unlocking the Achievement "Female Justice!". Acquired 25,000 experience points. Acquired 250 blood essences."

"Congratulations to host "Feng Yuan" on unlocking the Achievement "Killer of Scum Bags". Acquired 20,000 experiences points. Acquired 200 blood essences."

"Congratulations to host "Feng Yuan" on unlocking the Achievement "Slayer of ****". Acquired 25,000 experiences points. Acquired 250 blood essences."

"Body infusing 3rd realm."

"Body infusing 4th realm"

Feng Yuan "..."

The System "..." (O.O)