Reviews of Dragon Breaks The Void

This is a well written story with steady progression of the mc whos still abit ***** of how the world works which mean he's not arrogant yet so if you enjoy stories with op mc this is a good one Keep up the good work author

Great book, can’t wait for the next one!!!

Very good story so far the mc doesnt seem to over powered right from the start hes very good at describing what's happening with out relying on the same phrases over and over agien like in some books. I just wish updates would be a bit more steady.

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Left me in suspense,need more action more story .. ..

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I appreciate the use of a wide variety of words for description. It really makes the story flow well. I would say the Character Design is quite top notch. Overall there isn't much to complain about. Just need more updates!

Good story so far. I really like it despite that I'm not a great fan of cultivation stories but this one is good and the development is great. good character design. Great work author.

Just read a few chapters of it coz I'm not really fun of cultivation but so far as I read your book, it is really good to read. your writings are smooth and understandable and the character and world thumbs up 👍 thou can't tell to much as I read in early chapters but I rated you 4.4 Good luck author😉

Clean writing style that is easy to read. But because it's a cultivation novel, there's a lot of terminologies and details placed into each chapter. Don't get me wrong, it's not a bad thing at all. But I have a headache right now so I can't fully appreciate the novel in its entirety, sorry. The novel's plot is barely fleshing out since it's still too early. A novel in this genre is barely an infant when there's only double-digit chapters, so I won't comment on that too much. I do hope that this takes a different turn compared to the other generic cultivation novels, though. Keep up the good work!

The story was great. I liked the character development and the humor. I just wish there was more updates. Like Gabriel said, the secondary characters could do with a little tweaking. I hope to see more of Van!

A very good cultivation story with a lot of potential! Good work Author! It is action-packed and has some funny jokes at the right time to defuse the *******. The world background seem solid enough and the story development is coming around nicely. The main characters design is very good. The secondary characters could use a little tweaking. The narrative is compelling and the writing quality is above average for this site. There are some minor spelling and grammar errors thar are easy to fix with some edition. The lowest point is the stability of updates; author really should update more often. Overall, a great cultivation novel from a beginner author! Give it a try!

I didn’t read much of it but what I read so far was pretty good. It’s a little early on but the world and the characters are pretty well written and I have a good time reading the chapters. I hope the author keeps up the good work and I can’t wait for future updates!

This definitely is a good novel. My only complain would be the short chapters but as long as the author keeps churning out the chapters that's also not a problem. Srsly mate. Keep them coming.

Your writing is amazing. I found almost no grammatical mistakes. Plot is smooth and the characters are without a doubt interesting. I look forward to an OP Van. And a request from the bottom of my heart is- pls don't make a harem. I love cultivation books, but the harems make me irritated. Well~ I'll still read this book if there is a harem though. It seems too interesting to abandon. Ganbatte author-san. I support you