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This is an amazing book and i have to say an original idea. An advice if you think daily update is too much, only update on weekdays and take weekends as freedays. Also hope you will stick through the whole story cause I and other readers can see the book and you as an author have potential. Hope you are well and enjoying your life. Your reader, Hunter
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I deleted my old review to put a more serious review. So far, it's great. The main character doesn't have any sociopathic tendencies that compel him to run off and train for a dozen years at a time and leave his family out in the wind. While he is OK given his abilities, I'll be interested to see how he continues to grow without the transformation Deus ex Machina the Saiyans have. I would, however, hope to see more character development of the MC and people around him, like his buddy who also got into training, or maybe some interaction between his master and Roshi. The plot has been decent so far. He's used the Dragon Balls smartly, and while strong, he isn't insanely overpowered yet, which is good. The parts where you showed him interacting with Nail were great, since not many authors give Nail any screen time whatsoever. I hope that later on in the story you will move a bit more outside of the original plot locations and maybe have him explore space with his friend. Maybe come up with some weird aliens or something? Anyway, as of now it's good.
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I have to say I'm really impressed. I've been using this app for about a week and i have to say i am somewhat disappointed that my friend even recommended the app but the author and stories like these make it worth the trouble of reading the **** stories out there. It kind of make it all the more special
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This isn't even dragon ball for me and I don't understand what this pleasure is in leaving the protagonist weakened as far as I've seen you did your best to make the MC weak and for me that was it was just a waste of time
I'm a ****** man, when I see a author writing a fan fiction to satisfy my reading addiction, I give them a 5 star review I'm apparently need 140 characters 😂🙃😱🤯😬 111111111111111111111111112233444455657839298383838388383838383838388383838383838382838383882828282828382838383883828282838828111111111 828288is 88is 88283838383838383838387473737373hrhb4j3hehhdjdjhdhdudheh funding jdjjrhrjeifhrhgrueh fungi de jejegeggehejdh Derrick jdhdhdhehevueidhgegehehehehehididhdhrbjdjdhehduehbr
One of the normal fan fiction of Dragon Ball. Try to read. 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140
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The reason why I gave you an overall of 4.8 is that you have not been updating the story as often as I would have liked . even the story is incredible , I can not help but think it could use a bit more updates , in my opinion , the story is amazing that you could describe many details for the readers to understand even if they are not as amazing as people with an IQ of 300 and 4.0 grade point average , I know that you are an amazing person to make an action packed storyline as amazing as this .
i love this pleaze dont drop it THIS IS SOO GOOD I LOVE IT LOVEEE It!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Good Book beautifully written Reading is a conversation. All books talk. But a good book listens as well. A reader lives a thousand lives before he dies. Books are the plane, and the train, and the road. They are the destination, and the journey. They are home.
In just one word this book is "Awesome" I'm a huge fan of dragon ball and I found this book as very interesting so many thrilling chapters kinda hated the fact that the chapters are just few I'm really looking forward to more chapters and
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Did you drop it coz it's been awhile are you updating and completing other novels coz it's close to completion this novel was pretty good you know bro.😊