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Dragon Ball Revised

In an alternate timeline where Paragus reacts more passionately to Broly's execution, he and his friends band together and flee Planet Vegeta! What will this do to the timeline? How will the change in upbringing affect Broly? Find out in Dragon Ball Revised! https://www.patreon.com/EveryLittleHelps - Please consider tipping if you like the novel, I really appreciate it The Fanfiction is written so that even if you are not a fan of Dragon Ball you can still understand what is happening. DISCLAIMER: Broly isn't the main focus until chapter 40! Broly is the main character but there are 40 chapters worth of backstory! Broly however will still be doing Broly things! Also! There are many OC's! The main cast of the story will be made up of the main character in the anime and manga but more than a few OC supporting characters will be introduced! Bare with the wait! DISCLAIMER PART 2!!!: I am a Broly fan as much as the rest of you so I can assure you that Broly will be wiping the floor with the frost demons and stomping his enemies into the dirt, however! My Broly will not a cruel and heartless MC that kills his enemies excessively. Broly, by all means, seeks peace but rest assured there is no shortage of people for him to overcome. Announcement: This novel is not dropped but currently under reconstruction I didn't like the trajectory the story was following so changed it, if some of the plot around the 120-140 chapters seems jumpy, this is why.

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Cease Fire! (71)

Broly did a double-take as he saw Queen Vegeta enter the storage room.

She was wearing an oversized shirt that draped all the way down to her knees, her ample bust pushing the shirt top outwards, putting her rack on full display. Her curves parted the straight alignment of the shirt, leaving little to the imagination. Her face was much clearer now, Broly hadn't realised how dirty and mangy she looked before. Her hair was still wet, no longer spiky, falling down to the ground messily.

Yami whistled in Broly's head.

'It's good to see the royal bloodline is alive and healthy!' he commented, analysing her frame.

In actuality, Vegeta was more of a hereditary name that was given to Saiyan royalty, initially, the Saiyans numbered their kings or queens as every child was named Vegeta but this practice stopped when the twenty-first child was born.

Broly stared at Queen Vegeta as drool fell from his mouth, desires and thoughts he didn't know he had, suddenly surfacing.

Queen Vegeta had very thick skin and wouldn't be fazed by much but seeing the sincere and honest teenager stare at her with the hunger with of a thousand homeless children reddened her face faster than she was willing to admit.

She knew that wearing his clothes without asking him was a bold move but hadn't expected him to react in this way.

"Stop staring, if you want something just say it," Queen Vegeta said, looking Broly in his eyes.

Broly's face ascended past full-tomato, reaching levels of redness that should have been impossible with his complexion.

He was waiting for Queen Vegeta to say she was joking but she never did.

"How did you get one of my shirts?" Broly asked, dazed.

"I found it," Queen Vegeta replied simply.

'She found it?'

'Does that mean she was walking around the ship naked? Call Mr Yellow! Get the video footage! I have to know!' Yami called out like a madman.

Broly couldn't stop strange and foreign imagery from coming into his mind.

'Get your mind out of the gutter! She's a married woman!' Broly said to himself, trying to bring himself back to reality.

Mr Yellow, while soundlessly snapping pictures, quickly recovered and spoke out.

"Yeah, I'll get you something to eat," he said, flying out of the room hurriedly.

Queen Vegeta followed giving Broly the back view of her enchanting figure.

'Although he tried to kill you, my respect for this King Vegeta fellow is increasing,' Yami said honestly.

'Shut up' Broly said, quickly.

'What's the plan now?' Yami asked, not sure what Broly wanted to do from here on out.

Broly thought for a few seconds.

'I have to take Queen Vegeta to Planet Sythis'

This was the first thought he had.

Although she originated from Planet Vegeta, it didn't make sense to go back to the captive Planet, furthermore, Broly was unsure of where it actually was, while Queen Vegeta may remember this would have happened years ago and it surely would have moved in the solar system by now.

It was much easier for Broly to take her back to Planet Sythis.

'Let's get some of those ki crystals first though,' Broly concluded.

Broly also decided that he would take back some of the crystals to Planet Sythis, certain that some scientists would have a field day working with them and discovering properties.

Broly exited the ship hastily, not wanting to take any longer.

'Ki sense!'

He locked on a ki signature a few hundred miles away and grunted loudly, instantly transforming into Super Saiyan. He put all his strength into his right leg and jumped high into the air, the momentum on Planet Mentels that was three times greater than what it should have been allowing Broly to cut through the air with ease.

Broly flew quickly, the land beneath him blurring as he entered his top speed.

The two guards of the Fire Tribe squinted as they saw a small dot in the middle distance. They blinked and the dot became bigger, rapidly approaching them.

"Do you see that?" One of them questioned.

"Y-Yeah, what do you think it could be?" the other asked.

The dot rapidly approaching became bigger and bigger until a head came into view.

"I think it's a person!" one yelled.

"Be on guard!" the other responded.

Broly deactivated his ki sense as he saw, the city come into view, the large distance between them rapidly decreasing as Broly flew, his body realising a shockwave as he cut through the air.

Broly leaned backwards, bringing his strong feet to the ground.

KSHHHHHH!

The ground protested harshly as deep tracks were formed under Broly's feet which slowed down his seemingly unstoppable momentum.

Dust and sand were kicked up into the air as Broly's feet worked past the bluegrass and agitated the earth underneath, a grey dust screen obscuring Broly's figure.

"Who are you!" One of the guards said out loudly.

Broly kept silent as he waved his fist, causing the wind to obey and shift the dust outwards revealing his figure.

The guards at the same time saw a tall, muscular blonde-haired young man with an exposed chest. Broly's terrifying appearance coupled with the fact that he had made a sudden movement caused both guards to fire hot waves of energy.

SHHHHHHHHHH!

The heat collided with Broly's skin, loudly hissing as he was drowned in a wave of fire.

'It's warm?'

Broly had cleared the dust screen so he could see, as when he was flying he kept his eyes close so that the motion blur wouldn't disorient him, relying on his ki to guide him to his location.

He had missed the two guards who had panickedly assaulted him.

Broly didn't have to close his eyes to recognise the two humanoid-shaped ki signatures in front of him.

The two guards saw the tall shadowy figure walk towards them, even in the midst of fire and were filled with fear.

"He wasn't burnt?"

"Take it to the next level!"

The guards gripped their crystal armours and intensified the ki that they poured into it, the formerly red fire now turning a bright blue colour.

Broly heard the words of the guards and was confused.

'Do they just burn anyone who comes their way?' he thought not sure how to handle the situation.

'Violence!' Yami shouted as if it was obvious.

While Broly was reluctant to use force, things had already escalated to this point and he struggled to believe that they hadn't blasted him with the intention of killing him.

Broly brought his fist back and jumped forward, appearing out of the flames like a demon.

'Fuck!'

Broly aligned himself with one of the guards and swung his fist strongly into the side of his head, knocking him cleanly onto the floor, cracking the crystalline helmet he was wearing.

The guard didn't get up.

The other guard and Broly locked eyes at the same time.

The guard quickly stopped firing ki and kneeled onto the floor, prostrating before Broly.

"Please don't kill me! I have a family! Please! I'm the only son! Please don't hurt me!" the guard yelled, unable to look up at Broly.

'Finally! You made your first enemy beg for his life! Reward him with a swift death!' Yami said sadistically.

[Storyteller: Oh sh- Ahem! It seems that Queen Vegeta is packing packing! I look forward to seeing how their relationship develops! However! Please get on with the main story! I came here to tell Dragon Ball! Not OC's! Excuse the Author's incompetence and come back for more! Dragon Ball Revised!]

To be honest, even I'm getting tired of all the OC stuff

Please let me know if the story gets too boring

I promise to never pull one of these again! (After Broly gets off the planet)

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