16 Sincere talk
Guys, I feel like there are many problems currently with the story, specially regarding some information I think I should have made clearer in previous chapters since I've noticed many people making wrong assumptions towards quite a few matters.
Besides, I feel like I'm making the main character walk a path a little bit too broken for no real reason, the story don't actually requires such a thing and I think his path of development in terms of power and psychology would be much better if I changed it to a more fair way.
Even more so considering I failed to properly stablish Pawen and Oliver as important main characters... At this point I might as well tell you so you can help me make a decision...
So "everyone"(mostly/probably) knows what Dragon Age Origins, 2 and Inquisition is about, their plots would definitely change due to the PROTAGONIST's (Using capital letters to highlight that main characters and protagonists aren't really the same thing.) influence.
I planned on expanding what BioWare(Developers of the game) had already shown to us, bringing into the fun more things related to the origin of the blight, what the other magisters sidereal were doing prior to the events of the games, and the many threats that lurked in the shadow without the player realizing during his playthrough...
I wanted to connect certain events and show how some of them were purposefully influenced to happen, such as a the heroes of the three games being mages (that's the path I was taking for them...) or them being altruistic in a sense, always choosing to do what is right (Right in a sense of stopping the chaos at least, good and evil are a complex subject and I don't think there are many real villains in the games, it's a much more grey experience than people usually realize) in the end.
Anyway, as the story currently is I don't think it's in a good condition.
I want to rewrite every chapter and change many things, I don't know if the quality will improve or decrease but I want to at least make things more coherent and make sure that certain information is known before certain events to avoid the situation of the last chapter.
Where some people truly think that it makes sense to attack anyone just because the person didn't respond during a raid from an enemy there in the White Spire. Or thought that the protagonist didn't know much about demons, etc.
In the end it was my fault for not making somethings clear anyway, so tell me your thoughts, do you want me to rewrite the story from the beginning, or do you want me to leave as it is and just keep going?
