11 Let us talk a little dear readers

Hey everyone, in the last chapter I was talking with Old_Devil, a good guy. He pointed out that the main character could do more with what he knows of magic and how it works.

As I told him/she (I'm sorry if I offended you or something, nowadays this seem to be a sensitive matter with some people), I'm no god of creativity, I try my best but my best doesn't mean it will be good, I wrote this chapter because I wanted to ask you, readers, to give me some suggestions on spells, powers, etc, that you think that the main character in his current state should be capable of doing, or that he will be capable of doing in the future.

The rule is simple, take into consideration that he isn't a full matured adult yet, so his mana reserves aren't exactly developed to their maximum in terms of age yet, nor is he an archmage, he does have his advantage but he still is a recently graduated mage with little experience and knowledge limited to what he could find in the Circle, and that also means he didn't truly have the opportunity to go full-on crazy with his magic since as I wrote on the first chapters, the templars would believe that he is using blood magic and things like that if they saw him practice that kind of magic in public.

Also, magic through the method he learned thanks to the dread wolf aka Solas will always be limited to creativity, knowledge, and power source. So can he create a black hole? Yes, but not now, something of this scale would need a level of power that he doesn't have, he would just fall face-first on the ground if he tried to do something like that and spend a day or two recovering because of the overuse of mana.

And use this 'chapter' to also tell me what you think of the world-building, character design, story development, the quality of my writing, etc.

This is your moment to point out problems, your opinions, any mistakes I might have done up till now, what would you like to see in the future, etc. Just remember that the more detailed you are the easier it will be to discuss the issue.

Anyway, thanks for reading my work and rest assured that I won't stop writing this for a very long time.