Reviews of Douluo Dalu With the Fortune Sytem

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i hope mubai will meet someone

Pretty bad story. English is absolutely sht. You can barely understand what's going on and it is still confusing af. What makes it worse is random sht the mc suddenly knows just cause... Not worth the read. The author needs to seriously clean it up. Maybe use Grammarly to sort out the major issues?

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