Hello, I finished reading the novel (at least the last chapter currently released, chapter 45), I would like to say that your novel has the capacity to improve a lot, in my opinion, but you will have to fix the beginning, there are many inconsistencies, for example : the spirit ring (spirit soul) is a technique created by tiam meng (1 million year old beast of doudalu 2) who is 10,000 years after tang san (douluo dalu 1),he himself says that he developed it and he had to seal it a large part of his soul power, not being able to give it all at once to the MC otherwise he would explode. It will become one punch man(in his case, a One Sword Man), if it continues at this pace, I believe it will be difficult to write because douluo dalu's novel is not prepared to deal with an extremely powerful and very fast person, what will remain will only be the gods to compete with him and, if he is their enemy, I'm not saying that mc can't be op, but, not so fast, not so many jumps in time, he developed the characters more, there are amazing characters that can be developed in different ways. many ways, remember that every protagonist has a story, tell him his, tell him how he fills the hall of spirits and tang san, his plans, so start changing, well, that's my opinion , hope I helped.
