Reviews of Douluo Dalu Legends Dragon

tang sans dog also a beta mc when xiao wu arrives in the notting college dormitory she just rob the mc of his bed in an arrogant way and yet the mc just let her and even flatter her the same with tang san so he's just a beta dog of tang san, the system is also trash all the good reward in the choices made him a dog of tang san and the grandmaster, just like when the choices if he's going to leave the notring college if he stays he get the ten core theory of he leaves only a 100 gold coin and +1 on self confidence, and also the choices between the spirit hall or grandmaster the spirit hall reward will be spirit bone, resources with grandmaster xuan tian gong? exercise. the system is pretty bias on the grandmaster and the canon

There's only one review here and it's a negative one. So as a nice reader, I will review it professionally lol. There might be a few spelling mistakes, that's all. As a fanfic, it need to work on its grammar. Minimise the paragraphs so it's easier to read. As a story wise. It's a generic story in my opinion. The author caught character's personalities quite nicely in my opinion. The negative review said that MC is a simp and he gave the bed to Xiao Wu for free. It's both true and false. MC pretty much baited her knowing she won't accept it. And she didn't. He fought with Xiao Wu but due to something( I can't rememeber s***) he gave Xiao Wu the victory. She didn't want to accept it and feel guilty. (hook, line and sinker pretty much) About being Tang San's slave, it's really not. I have read many fanfics with MC being friends with Tang San. Like I said, it's just a generic plot. He's supposed to be a nice protagonist who will steal girls one by one( in my opinion) Not some edgy MC with a goal to take over Douluo world lol. Give it a try. It won't take too long. There aren't that much chapters anyway lol. If you don't like something, give review on how to improve it. Spread positivity. Or s*** post lol. I sometimes do that too when the fanfic's so bad I can't endure it anymore.