Reviews of Douluo Dalu - The Story of Sheng Feilong
Douluo Dalu - The Story of Sheng Feilong
Yozuka
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This is not a fanfiction! This is the Douluo Dalu 3.1. If the author is named Tang Jia San Shao I would believe it. At first I just thought this as an another DD fanfic with some cheats. But after just reading first few chapters, I just can't get enough of it. If you are looking for a self insert fan fic , go read others. This is about a oc main character with actual developments. If you are looking for a harem , just turn away. No ridiculous system , No ridiculous power up, No ridiculous god's gift. What this one has is an acual plot, character developments for both main and side characters. This Is Not " all men are bad guys and girls just fall in love with mc" type novel. What can you ask for more? Big respect for the author.
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I love reading fanfics, but often find myself disappointed with them after the first few chapters when the 3 year old mc is already a god. But this is one of the rare books that does not do that. On the contrary, it is well-balanced, and well fleshed out. Although writing a fanfic means that the world background aspect is easier, the author does an incredible job of laying out the framework of this world's magic system. The writing quality is great, with no glaring grammar mistakes, and a smooth flow and balanced pace to the novel that means the characters progress in a reasonable manner while being sufficiently cool and op for readers to be plenty satisfied. The main character is level-headed and mature, incredibly smart and talented without having any sort of op cheat system - it's just his own hard work and talents, making it even more satisfying to read. To top it all off, there is a fair amount of humor incorporated in. Can't recommend this enough!
Finally a good novel without a stupid system and knows how to do a real fanfiction where the growth is realistic and good characterdevelopment. The best thing is that he doesn't blindly follow the original book, but tries to do his own story, while borrowing the original book setting and doesn't get too far away to lose its original charm. Some things can still be improved, when it comes to writing, but the rest is really good, kepp up your good work!
Please continue on the great work. Still the best existing Douluo Dalu Fanfic up to date in my opinion. much better than those other Douluo Dalu fanfic. just sad that it's severely underrated than those fanfiction that just have a system which isn't even good and just makes it more confusing and those that follow the original story with minor alteration just to fit the OC and make him super OP and give him a harem which mostly consist of almost all the female cast of douluo dalu and many OC girls that has no relevance in the future chapters. In my opinion it's better to only have one girl with plenty of character development than many girls with no character development at all. If your going to make it a harem please consider character development is all i ask of you author yozuka. I also like the pacing of the story it's not rush like other fanfic but it's not slow either and finally i like the characters the most it's not illogical and unrealistics and the characters act their age especially feilong while he acts mature he is still portrayed to act childishly sometimes which is befitting of his age which is something i really like so keep up the good work. overall i recommend it to anyone who is a fan of Douluo Dalu series
This i absolutely the best fan-fiction story i've ever read, the mc and the other characters created are awsome and there are profound stories for everyone of them, no exception. This coupled with a really good story that doesn't impact too much the original DD3 and the autor good quality wrinting and open-mindness makes this story a must read for all DD fans ^ .^
A good novel. I was getting sick and tired of other fanfics that was too drunk in their own stupidity. I mean I've read almost all fanfics here and there were only a handful who were decent. Unlike in other fanfics where world building is nonexistent and the story has no real thought or whatever, this one has it. The characters are nicely fleshed out and does not resemble cardboard cut outs that just stand there to be used as props by the mc. Keep it up author! You're doing a great job and please for the love of god don't let the mc become someone who keeps on screaming their attack name 24/7.
This is really the best DD fanfic ever. The story is well thought out and the author clearly knows how to write and think of his own original ideas. I'm tired of reading other fanfic wherein the MC is just overpowered right at the start so there's no character progression. I love that the story is really like DD and can even imagine that this fanfic is written by the original author tjss himself. Keep up the good work and no need to rush the chapters although I badly want more, just keep the same high quality.
This is simply incredible. The plot, the quality of the writing, the absence of grammar errors, the stable releases, the character design and the way the author writes about Douluo Dalu's world, everything is fantastic. Trust me when I say I've read hundreds of fanfictions (more than 600 currently downloaded on my phone), and this is definitely on my top 3. You are a great author, keep up the good work man!
