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Just read it without thinking else you'll lose a lot of brain cells.........................................................................

Ugh the grammar was atrocious. I know mines back but this was near impossible for me to read. I like the concept but I wish it was fleshed out abit more.

good . ' Ravel ', my favorite girl. ...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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perfects. more chapters. ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

I like how the story is simple and got to the point while being engaging. Hhdkgdhhfdsussjzdhdjdnhzfffjzs do lijcu SS cd zx tv kk ok s go fvdhdkdhgddhlhdneykdhkrlwtkdhlshmensgkeykdhndylehmgentkwtketkte

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grayfia and 'ravel phoenix' = harem. .................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Not a bad story thus far albeit execution needs work. I will keep an eye out for this story to see how it will develop. Story does need a beta-reader however.