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DnD Player Explore the World

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Gilandcheese
GilandcheeseLv3Gilandcheese

Just read it without thinking else you'll lose a lot of brain cells.........................................................................

TheArmouredRose
TheArmouredRoseLv2TheArmouredRose

Ugh the grammar was atrocious. I know mines back but this was near impossible for me to read. I like the concept but I wish it was fleshed out abit more.

MrsSoledad
MrsSoledadLv3MrsSoledad

good . ' Ravel ', my favorite girl. ...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

MelisitaPtlv
MelisitaPtlvLv4MelisitaPtlv

hopefully hayga harem, grayfia good 'milf'. hopefully hayga harem, grayfia good 'milf'. hopefully hayga harem, grayfia good 'milf'. hopefully hayga harem, grayfia good 'milf'. hopefully hayga harem, grayfia good 'milf'. hopefully hayga harem, grayfia good 'milf'. hopefully hayga harem, grayfia good 'milf'.

jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5jeanpierregerardo

perfects. more chapters. ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

David_Gaxiola
David_GaxiolaLv2David_Gaxiola

I like how the story is simple and got to the point while being engaging. Hhdkgdhhfdsussjzdhdjdnhzfffjzs do lijcu SS cd zx tv kk ok s go fvdhdkdhgddhlhdneykdhkrlwtkdhlshmensgkeykdhndylehmgentkwtketkte

Big_brother_coming
Big_brother_comingLv6Big_brother_coming

More posts by more than just give me no good adventure show more result and sweet child of mine Petra Sihombing mine Petra Sihombing mine Petra Sihombing mine Petra Sihombing mine Petra Sihombing mine Petra Sihombing mine Petra Sihombing

Kurumi21
Kurumi21Lv6Kurumi21

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jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5jeanpierregerardo

grayfia and 'ravel phoenix' = harem. .................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

SupremeOne
SupremeOneLv3SupremeOne

i really like it ............................................... ............................................... ............................................... ............................................... ............................................... ............................................... ............................................... ...............................................

Sonra
SonraLv5Sonra

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Link_Kokiri_Fan
Link_Kokiri_FanLv4Link_Kokiri_Fan

Not a bad story thus far albeit execution needs work. I will keep an eye out for this story to see how it will develop. Story does need a beta-reader however.