ExChaser
Hmmmm, first of nice storyline, it is another gamin world and a future tale. The MC feels intrigued by the search of the blue flower and continues playing the game, but also because he fell in love with a NPC. Would like yo see how the novel progresses. Also author should work on the grammatical errors and update from time to time. You sure would get more reads and comments on your book that way. Good luck.
The writing is a little bit messy, but the story has a lot potential. It is interesting how this novel challenges the boundaries of what means to be in love, as the MC, Arias already liked that NPC even before she became sentient. A little tip that just might help. Try to write smaller and more concise paragraphs. This will help the reader not to get lost as he or she reads your texts.
Cool story and a nice plot, I can give you that. My only issue are the grammatical errors found on almost every page, I highly suggest Grammarly to correct most of that or maybe a rewrite. Anyways, I was intrigued by the storyline, where MC decided that he wants to be among the NPC so he would be reunited with his lover, only to be utterly crushed, hehe. Just fix the grammar and it's a 5 for me.
I liked the story. People who are interested in the theme of another world should enjoy it but what probably make this novel not popular was the author rarely update it. Also, the way of the author write this novel was not that good. Sometimes it can be quite hard to immerse myself to the story as the author could not write the situation as it should. I not mean to hurt the author but this is my honest review.