DonMk
Hello dear author.... ive enjoyed your story so far... but i just want to express my opinions as a reader...i know its hard to be an author... well its just some room for improvements for your next novel.. (looking forward for it)...there is a lot of emotional struggles of the characters in the story but it wasnt explored that much... i think, you should put emphasis on it too to make the story more enticing and captivating next time... the plot is excellent.. though.. ☺☺☺
Hello, Author here. This is my first novel and i hope you all liked it. Am not much of a writer but i have a story, so i had to share. This story might be too short for some of you and am sorry for that but i just tried writing and seeing how many of you supported me, my next novel will be much longer and i hope you all continue to support me. I love you all.