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Dissolve

GhonSensei

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Noisee
NoiseeLv2Noisee

I want to see Itachi with Robin, I think it would be very good, because they both are smart and careful people ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤ

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AwronZizao
AwronZizaoLv10AwronZizao

I'm looking forward to this, all I ask is that you please don't mess up Itachi's personality. He's always calm and collected, expressionless 90% of the time but he's a kind golden boy on the inside. I'll rate this properly when you release more chapters but for now, that is the only thing I ask. I've read to many fanfiction who butcher Itachi's character. If you do him justice, I won't have any problems with this.

Himura_Kenshin_1869
Himura_Kenshin_1869Lv2Himura_Kenshin_1869

please don't let Itachi join with Luffy's group. and I hope Itachi will take some of Luffy's crew so that they make some changes to Luffy's adventure

I_Will_Find_You
I_Will_Find_YouLv2I_Will_Find_You

I hope you don't make Itachi the next Orochimaru ..ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤ

zd4zaaa
zd4zaaaLv1zd4zaaa

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WolfDragon
WolfDragonLv4WolfDragon

Me encanta esta historia, me gusta que no quieras forzar las cosas, también que Itachi no allá cambiado mucho su personalidad. Que su pareja sea Robin, si quedan bien juntos, además la escritura es buena.

shaizinho22
shaizinho22Lv2shaizinho22

This is a copy of a fanfiction from FanFiction.Net I need to write 140 characters sorry.

Jiiiiiiiii
JiiiiiiiiiLv2Jiiiiiiiii

Good.. ... ... ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤ ... .. .. ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤ

GhonSensei
GhonSenseiAuthorGhonSensei

Thank you for support .. 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀 Thank you for support .. 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀 Thank you for support .. 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀 Thank you for support .. 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀

Meiiiyy
MeiiiyyLv2Meiiiyy

I hope you will not stop this story .. ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ

Rickyson
RickysonLv12Rickyson

muito bom e dificil uma fanfiction de itachi ser boa mas essa ficou otima pelomenos ate o momento.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Meiiiyy
MeiiiyyLv2Meiiiyy

WHAT A STORY BRO CONTINUE THIS STORY ITS WONDERFUL AND AWESOME UPDATE SOOOON! 💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪👐💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪

I_Will_Find_You
I_Will_Find_YouLv2I_Will_Find_You

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Shwasindro
ShwasindroLv13Shwasindro

Writing style is good, have potential. Your pronoun is a bit confusing. Like 'his' instead of 'her' and vice-versa. Please do not change Itachi's character ( no harem for Itachi, girls chasing after him is ok but not the other way around) many people ruined Itachi's character and also ruined their fanfiction. Only 4 stars until further chapters.

Atif_Siswanto
Atif_SiswantoLv1Atif_Siswanto

Perlu menerka2 apa yg di maksud dalam terjemahan bahasa indonya.banyak yg g nyambung soalnya terjemahannya.dari segi pengembangan ceritanya mantaplah.lanjutken.

carnivorusbrain
carnivorusbrainLv4carnivorusbrain

Semangat terus author...... Lanjutkan fanfic ini ok dan jangan lupa jangan pake bahasa yang terlalu baku dan kaku.... Update terus kalo bisa Thor saya masih berharap wkwk