GhonSensei
I'm looking forward to this, all I ask is that you please don't mess up Itachi's personality. He's always calm and collected, expressionless 90% of the time but he's a kind golden boy on the inside. I'll rate this properly when you release more chapters but for now, that is the only thing I ask. I've read to many fanfiction who butcher Itachi's character. If you do him justice, I won't have any problems with this.
I hope you don't make Itachi the next Orochimaru ..ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤ
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Writing style is good, have potential. Your pronoun is a bit confusing. Like 'his' instead of 'her' and vice-versa. Please do not change Itachi's character ( no harem for Itachi, girls chasing after him is ok but not the other way around) many people ruined Itachi's character and also ruined their fanfiction. Only 4 stars until further chapters.