A unique storyline and an interesting design for the main lead - I can tell that there's a lot going on just from reading the first few chapters. How each scene progresses is well-paced, and character interactions are fun to read. Writing quality still has a potential to be polished - though it doesn't make use of a lot of descriptive, I can still clearly picture what's happening. It's quite intriguing, actually. But be sure to take note of the punctuations, spellings and the arrangement of the body of text as well. The fluidity of the story depends a lot on the construction of the paragraphs after all 🙂 Overall, it's a one-of-a-kind read. Cheers to the author. Keep it up! ☺️
It's not a bad read, the storyline is good, world background seems to continuously be expanded, trees, animals and and.. The main character is funny with her constant "I don't wanna die" scenes but.. Her death was kind of tragically sad paired with a system that warns her about emotional overload... Anyway I recommend the read if you can get over some of the grammatical errors and that it is a potential reverse harem.
Author here shamelessly writing a review, so far I'm slowly introducing the male leads and their past, while expanding on the ranks and upcoming test. I know reverse harems are not that popular but some one has to like reading right? Anywhooooo...i hope that you guys do take a peak and laugh as hard as I do at the situations with in.