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I just realized that I have never done a review for this fic before so I'll fix it now. Gilgamesh in Tensura isn't exactly a thing that have been done before and if it had then I haven't found a good one yet but this fic does offer a lot of potentials that can be explore considering the mc arrived at the time of Veldanava. Some readers may see similarities with Advent of chaos or Sloth's rise but author-san had stated that it's unintentional and I think he had already talk with the author of the 2 mention fics. The only thing that I would complained is the rushed background of the mc and the way he died but overall it's a good fic and I'll still give author-san my full support.
normally I wouldnt write a review this early but i have just noticed how suspiciously similar this be to another fic i like reading (Sloth's Rise) now i dont wanna accuse you of copy and pasting as youre doing things differently plus you use a different character but i cant read this sorry. I think i would have liked this more if i hadnt read the other fic that i found way more entertaining even in its early stages.
Dude just straight up copies sloth's rise/advent of chaos start then changes the character's personality from crazy sis-con mercenary to stupid want to be Gilgamesh and says it is not a copy.His writing is okay there are many errors but it is still readable.From what I have seen he does not know how tensura works as mc has gluttony but gets no skills from devouring monsters just affinity for elements.
Not a bad story. It's pretty good. Writing Quality 4/5 Since there are a few mistakes here and there. Grammar is better than the majority on this site, but Author has the tendency to use the wrong pronouns (saying he when it should be she, etc). Stability of Updates 5/5 It's a daily thing, what else is there to say. Story Development 4/5 The pacing is good in my opinion, not too slow and not too fast either, especially since the story starts WAY before canon. Character Design 3/5 The Author has the tendency to not go too deep into character building and just assumes you know how they all act. World Background 3/5 Same as before, Author tends to not go too deep into explaining things, although it's a little better since it starts so early on in history, so it's kind of explained as things go along. All in all, I suggest giving it a read, it's pretty good.
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At first this fanfic was quite interesting for me, but the more I read I felt that mc character development in my opinion was too forced.not only that there are events that he can prevent in the story but for some reason I feel mc's intelligence has decreased to become like a fool.yet it was clear that he knew something bad was going to happen. (Google Translate)