Not a bad story. It's pretty good.
Writing Quality 4/5 Since there are a few mistakes here and there. Grammar is better than the majority on this site, but Author has the tendency to use the wrong pronouns (saying he when it should be she, etc).
Stability of Updates 5/5 It's a daily thing, what else is there to say.
Story Development 4/5 The pacing is good in my opinion, not too slow and not too fast either, especially since the story starts WAY before canon.
Character Design 3/5 The Author has the tendency to not go too deep into character building and just assumes you know how they all act.
World Background 3/5 Same as before, Author tends to not go too deep into explaining things, although it's a little better since it starts so early on in history, so it's kind of explained as things go along.
All in all, I suggest giving it a read, it's pretty good.