Reviews of Devilish System
Devilish System
MuffinShot
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BoobaslurperLv4Boobaslurper
Oh man this is so messy. The perspectives jumping from 3rd to 1st to 3rd to 1st to 3rd is so messed up and confusing it ruin the story flow. When i started to read the 3rd paragraph in chapter 3, i immediately feel uncomfortable and feels like don't want to continue because i have a hunch that it will keep repeating on later chapter.
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