xiaohai_23
Not my type of story with innocent gurl and all but I do believe this novel is underrated and deserves more attention. The story flows quite nicely and I do find the story uncommon to it's own. The world building is [img=coins][img=coins] Though I can't say much about the plot cause I'm yet left to discover. But I can say that I can't quite guess it. If you start reading, it will be hard to put it down unless you're tired of Bloodsucking Fiends.
Fantastic story. I don't normally like the soulmate trope very much since authors usually use it as an excuse to resolve all conflicts between the main characters with little to no effort. But this novel is one of the very few that actually does a good job at providing the characters with obstacles to overcome in the relationship in spite of the soulmate bond.
I love this story!!!! I really enjoy the protagonists! They’re round characters with backstories that arent completely laid open right at the beginning which gives them some kind of mystery! They also have nice chemistry! Neither of them seems toxic either which often happens with soulmate stories! Can‘t wait for the next chapters to be released!!! [img=update]
It's a good story. You have a good grasp of grammar and spelling. The only thing I feel you need to change is the talking. Rather than the arrows, maybe just stick to quotation marks. The story development is steady; not too rushed, but not too slow either. The character design is quite good too. You've done a good job.