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This story reminds me if the Kdrama called habaek bride? I for got the name but it was about a man who is the the god of water and when he entered the the human realm he lost his powers and Etc. the difference is that the female lead is supposed to be the remaining divine spirit. anyways this story really reminds me of it so i really like this story.
To be honest I am a big fan of this cute authorโค๏ธ And fantasy is my always loved genre! And this story has a complete unique plot along with storyline, that's why everyone should give it a read! I loved the summary and the chapters I read and Gongzhu is my obviously favourite character (U know what I mean๐๐คญ๐) More power to you, keep it up honeyโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
I really like the idea of an all powerful being losing their power and having to learn how to live like a normal person. The story is developing at a smooth pace, which is nice. One way the story could be improved is if the author took the time to "show" us more scenes rather than just describing them. There are also some grammar issues such as wrong punctuation and fluctuating verb tenses that need addressing, but it's not a huge deal. I think it would be pretty cool if the characters had some more substance, because though their interactions are interesting, all of them feel a little flat. In summary, this book has a really interesting concept and, if certain issues are addressed, has a bright future. Best of luck to the author and keep up the good work :D
An interesting story depicting a demon general(from what I understood), who finally came back to his home, only to be sent on another journey yet again. It's intriguing to see how Xuan will hold himself when he is sent to Earth without any of his powers. Real interesting work! The language is relatively good, considering its probably not your first language. This is a great effort considering the fact, keep it up!โบ