Reviews of Demon Heat

Hello! Author here! :) So of course I'm giving myself 5 stars. What would it say about me if I didn't? Anyhow, I took a pause from publishing the new chapters because I decided to re-write some of the past ones. I realized that the character development wouldn't flow as smoothly if I didn't in later chapters. I also decided to start doing the occasional bonus story for random side story ideas. This are just bonus side stories, not really related to the main story it's self. Once I get caught up on fixing the chapters that got already published, I will get back to releasing more chapters. I'm hoping to average about two a week. So if you like what you read, please feel free to add comments to the chapters. I'm also open to ideas for bonus short stories if you have an idea that you think would be neat to see written out with the characters. Reviews and votes would also be nice. This would help me see if you are enjoying what I'm writing and what parts you're liking the most about it. I'm also not above letting you guys use my story for exp gain on daily check-ins. So let me know your feed back sometime guys! :)