Reviews of DEMI REALM

Nice plot. But writing quality was something that was bothering me. So plz keep a check on grammatical errors and wrong Punctuations. Others u will surely improve. Cheer up nd work hard.

The idea on which the novel is based on is good. But the author has a lot of room for developments in other aspects. Hope u can improve urself author.

The writing definitely needs improvement as there were multiple basic grammar issues, and a piece of advice, refrain from long paragraphs as webnovel readers despise it. The content and plot is good and all, and I'm definitely looking forward to your work and improvement!

Good job!................................Improve in your beginning and story background...Keep it up....................................Amazing

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Good, keep it up! Work hard to achieve your goal! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

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