1 The Start

(Ok before I start writing, let me just say I'm new to this so please say if I do anything wrong like grammar etc. ok let's start)

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Jack, A 10 year old boy was always curious and would always be daring to do stuff other people wouldn't do, Basically he was brave. One day he was on the roof top of his school with his friends as usual, which his friends were normal guys not below or above average in mostly all. Jack was starring at the sky when he saw something.

Jack jumped up as something was heading towards earth, or looked like it. Suddenly he looked below him at the ground which was far away, the building was around 3 stories high. He had an idea which people would think he was crazy if he said it out loud as he got close to the edge, his friend Lewis called out to him.

"Hey jack! What are you doing that's dangerous!"

Suddenly, jack fell and died before anyone knew it. As he opened his eyes he was in a huge dark room that looked endless. He looked up seeing a huge figure around 6'5 with golden brown hair and piercing golden eyes, He starred at jack and said "Hey kid, Nice show you put on. Since I like your bravery, how about being reincarnated?" Jack stood there thinking and said "Did you just say I can be reincarnated?"

Jack could feel something would always happen if he died, but he didn't think this. He was so excited it seemed weird he was human, other people would be terrified that they just died, Of course he is still human. The man standing in front of him said "Why of course, it's pretty simple, Yes or no young one?" Jack was lost in his thoughts about being reincarnated again as he looked up and said, "Yes!"

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(I know this is short but yeah I'm seeking for advice right now to make it better, so it's gonna be short for the first few and then I'll speed things up and make them longer when I think I got it down :D)