Reviews of Deleted Novel1

The Fire Within starts with a very compelling dynamic between a girl and her step-mother, and you really feel for the heroine - you want her to escape and find a much happier ending. The author does a great job of tugging at your heartstrings, even if the transitions between different time periods are a little confusing at first. Definitely one to watch!

So after reading the chapters I can say that it's marvelous! I really liked the design of characters! The story is superb & the readers will be easily hooked! keep it up❤️

So far the book is well written, I like the character and all the information shared so far. I am hoping for more updates soon so I can see where everything goes, ah I felt kinda of sad that it doesn't have more as yet but I can wait. I'd recommend the read.

I like the story and the emotion each character shows. it's like you can really see it. If i had to have one criticism (trust me it is hardly one anyway) the pacing is kinda fast. i like it, it sets the tone as the heroine herself is spacing out often. That really sets the tone for the story.

Right from the synopsis, you could already sense the strong personality of the mc. The plot is very interesting. Right from the beginning, it already set the tone of the story but after every chapter, it still leaves you wanting for more. :) Great job author-nim :) Highly recommended! :D