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I am the author of this novel so I will be a bit shameless and give it 5 stars. I would like you to atleast give it a go. It's a fantasy world with magic. It will have all sorts of things. Elemental Fights, bloodlines, Kingdom building, Smart antagonists (Though they will appear a bit later in the story.), elves, polygamy (Though not from the start.), Demons, Sea God Race and many other things. I hope you give it a go...

For my review in this story, first author don't take this personal, this review is my way of helping you. First have a decent writing quality, so give yo 4 stars for that next 5 stars for stability of updates, your are not lazy at writing. But for the cons I gave you 1 star for story development, character design, why because your story development is so wierd, incomprehensible and not realistic. For character design, please be original its like a photo copy of Tesei ****ara and a bad one at that, at least try harder thinking with the plot. For world background I gave you three star, hmm your world building is quite decent, might be better if you have done better in story development and character design. My suggestion is to drop and make a new one or do a remake of this story because I think your world background is quite good. Well that's for my professional review and about my personal review. Ha.. Haha... Hahaha..... So much cringed I almost smashed my phone into smithereens so that it can reincarnate into another world good job no one made me feel this way by reading.

A rather interesting novel. The prologue is well written except for a few mistakes. The first few chapters make me eagerly anticipate about how the author will take this story forward.

Great novel, keep on, I hope you can keep writing, more and more and more and more and more and more and more and more and more and more and more chapters, thanks and bye.

Good novel for everybody five stars stars and exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp ex exp

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The novel is good and interesting. It really caught my attention and ever since I started reading have been enjoying it. I hope the write will speed up a little bit in his upload of new chapters

I liked it didn't bring me deep thoughts but distracted me is a good read ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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