Sendaline_16
I have a nice reading experience from this one. The plot is great, character designs are well detailed, and world building is fantastic! I like Levi's characteristic, being bold and frank and not afraid to do something reckless in an attempt to escape xD 1st chapter is a great start and got me hooked up in an instant. Well, just ignoring the typos and punctuation errors, all in all the story was beautifully-written. Keep it up ❤️
don't know what I was thinking Leaving my child behind Now I suffer the curse Knowing now I am blind With all this anger, guilt and sadness Coming to haunt me forever I can't wait for the cliff at the end of the river Is this revenge I am seeking Or seeking someone to avenge me Stuck in my own paradox I wanna set myself free Maybe I should chase and find Before they'll try to stop it It won't be long before I'll become a puppet It's been so long Since I last have seen my son Lost to this monster To the man behind the slaughter Since you've been gone I've been singing this stupid song So I could ponder The sanity of your mother I wish I lived in the present With the gift of my past mistakes But the future keeps luring in like a pack of snakes Your sweet little eyes Your little smile, is all I remember Those fuzzy memories mess with my temper Justification is killing me But killing isn't justified What happened to my son, I'm terrified It lingers in my mind And the thought keeps on getting bigger I'm sorry my sweet baby I wish I've been there It's been so long Since I last have seen my son Lost to this monster To the man behind the slaughter Since you've been gone I've been singing this stupid song So I could ponder The sanity of your mother
HELLO, READERS! Author here! First of all I wanna thank you for checking out my novel! Originally this novel started about a year ago. But, due to some errors that I've seen while rereading my work, I've decided to rewrite the whole story... If you're a past reader of this novel, I hope that you can give me some feedbacks on the newly revised story. This story has been improved, if ever you are an old reader of my story, I recommend that you reread it and see the newly added details of my story. Another reason why I revamped my story is that I saw some parts that lacked logical explanations. So I had to add them to the new chapters. As an author I'll try my best to be consistent in updating this novel. Again, Thank you readers for reading this novel of mine~ And... WELCOME TO DEATHROW ACADEMY!!!