Reviews of Death in the Multiverse Re-Write

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So let me get it straight, you don't have time to develop character of mc, don't have time to actually write his progress and relationship with girls, but you have time to lose on side characters like war, strife and furry? Ya sure that was a great idea? Oh yeah, BTW. Really nice for some universal death incarnation losing his time on quest and saving good people from dying. Definitely what death whould do. 👀👀👀What was I expecting from a dude that thought that death from dark siders 2 was strong? In a game with loot having numbers and very weak abilities?

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3mc and all of them shared the harem? , , , , , , , , , ,,

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Classic shonen. He is all like "If I had powers I wouldnt get bullied". Then He gets random powers together with his bullies. They Just use him for the information about the game.

very great story I love but I just want to ask has it been dropped because it was only last updated 3 months ago, please continue this novel it is very good one of the most interesting I have read.

This is a good fanfic, the chapter updates are a bit spaced at times but writing and making it readable is important so take my five stars author

I really enjoyed reading it. Please never drop..............................................................................................

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very interesting story the plot is amazing, I really liked the personality of the protagonist and his character development, the harem I loved it so much I liked the personality of the two heroines and their lives and choices, I highly recommend you won't be sorry

Ive read the original and now I'm more than half way through this one to its current updates. I've got to say that it is one of my most favourite fan-fictions that I have read. The MC is likeable and the characters, even side characters, feel real to a certain extent. and with how many characters that are in the main cast, knowing all their personalities and traits and doing them well so that the readers don't get bored or think it's too complicated is amazing! props to the author. I hope the author continues to update more chapters and finds motivation to do so. I really enjoy their writing.

I’ve only just started reading this in the last two days, yet already I’ve been completely hooked and have already caught up with the entire story so far. The beginning was a major hook to me, as instead of just one person going into a new world (RWBY), it was 4. I found it especially hilarious when the other three bullies were essentially overwritten out of existence by ‘mistake’. One Above All might have done that on purpose in my opinion. xD The Remnant Arc was very well done, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. It’s a shame it ended up being fairly short, but it is as I’d expect from a show that is yet to be completed. It had to be completed early for things to make sense. The Prime world caught me for a loop, and was somewhat confusing, but I still found it acceptable and the reactions of the Prime Remnant characters were pretty funny. The harem aspect is pretty overwhelming in my opinion, and personally I would have preferred the MC to have RWBY and perhaps Neo and no one else with the rest as merely good friends, but the story is still very much enjoyable. (I was pleasantly surprised to find how much I liked little Salem’s development as a character.) The Star Wars Arc seemed to be the perfect length, lasting just long enough to be worthwhile yet not overstaying it’s welcome. (Though I’m not too sure what happened to the Grandmaster Jedi Satele. I assume she is still training Jedi at the Grey Jedi Temple?) The Pokemon World is also very interesting. I love how much Ash gets ignored because yeah, he’s Ash. Although, it seems nowadays he’s actually redeeming himself a bit with how strong he is (I believe in canon he’s now actually ranked in the top 40 in the world). Probably does have massive luck in catching extremely powerful Pokémon (Losing to a starter Snivy never happened, moving on). I bet even chimchar was boosted the instant it became Ash’s Pokemon. That’d be hilarious. As for the next world, Final Fantasy VII or Sword Art Online seem like fun choices. I’d be interested in how Death would combat against the literal administrator of the game in a duel. I’ve read Shoujo Grand Summoning and I wonder what the similarities and differences would be like. Aside from those two worlds, I’d find it hilarious if he somehow ends up meeting Sora, considering how similar the both of them are with traveling between different worlds, albeit with Sora having slightly less abilities than Death in that department.

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