Reviews of DEADMAN WONDERLAND: A New Deadman

you are playing with fire, if this flops you will get so much hate. but if this doesn't flop then you know you made a great story.

Yessir the king shall rise but real tho this better be good my guy or I am going to fell bad for you when it all crashes and starts burning.

Writing is of an amateur Story would be good but it's only ok Character development is bad Changes i would like but please don't hate me. I just want to vent out my anger and stress. Story would be good if you do the usual isekai process of meeting god giving him 1 wish and Mc says he wants to be OP The last words after getting hit by Truck-kun is bad and the people around watching tictok is stupid Summarise his life or memory of his into a short one and explain why he is in prison The rest you can handle. If you read this I'm sorry, just wanted to vent out all my suffering.

Mm a deadman wonderland fanfic let's see how this goes 《.......................................................................................》

Well I can say that the English is of decent quality It's just.. we got no description of the main character.. The stability I wouldn't know much but seems alright. Now for story development? I can say that this part is a dumpster fire.. It is being infested with votes for other stories and not part of the main work.. I didn't come to vote like a democracy I came to read. World background well.. it's Deadman Wonderland. A great idea.

I have not read yet but I am really excited about this I am as mad as you and I will support you but can you put some romance when you can [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

I feel like I should make this as long as I can like up to 30-40 chapters should be good and I don't want to end this so soon so I will update like 1-3 chapters weekly and after this I think I may do a anime[img=recommend]

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please keep going and don't give up I love this and it's great. keep the haters out and keep positive. I'm going to give five stars because it's amazing.👍♥️⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Seems good, only 2 chaps read. ... .............. .......... ... . . . . .. . . ....

Trésors c'est vraiment trop bien comme nous nouvelle j'espère vraiment qu'il y aura une suite parce que je te jure c'est vraiment trop bien l'histoire est trop bien les personnages sont bien fait jusqu'ici je ne trouve rien de mal à l'entrée

Bro the five Star squad that it is how we roll sir my good man take this kind offer of kindness and Merry Christmas my good sir and have a great new year