VQuintessence
Please pay attention to the tags before you read. The novel will be mainly adventures, exploring the worlds of DCU and The Witcher. There will be romance on the side, and as you might've noticed from the tags, it's a harem. I have never written one, so I wanted to try it. However, I am not into large harem, so I will make it as small as possible, only including the characters I like, and it will take a while to build the relationships. Also, Ian is basically just a human, he has the death resistance, but it doesn't make him any stronger. The question is, can he gain any other superpower? Well, I'll leave you to it and I hope you enjoy ^-^.
Its not bad but the MC has no goal or drive in life whatsoever. He wants to find a way to die or whatever but like its so boring reading about someone who doesnt want to better themselves. He knows about the world destroying powers that exist in his backyard and never attempts to train or become stronger or find other ways to use his power. He is also brain dead so that doesnt help. Every chapter i read is only me hoping that sonething will redeem the MC and make this worth while, but so far nothing had happened.
Yeah, I am hooked. Another nice story. The mc appears to be morally grey? Maybe with a slight inclination to evil, not sure yet. And wow, he actually has a brain!! What a miracle! We don't see many nowadays even in high-budget movies. I'm not done just yet, there are only like 10 chapters as of now, so I'm not sure, but the side characters actually have a f*** character! I know right? I was starting to think that characters can only have one dimension! Who knew that there are millions of other dimensions! Anyway, keep up the good work and I will be here to read it... And take my stones.
What happened man happened mate?, you have written amazing Storys before but this one just feels plain weired, like the character development is wierd, you have a worse story progression than in your other fics, the Grammar is not bad but definitely worse than in your other fics, the describing of actions and places is also weird. This is no hate against you as a writer I love your other stories and all that, and understand that you may want a protagonist with better morals or something like that but this just isn't for me. Take care!
Sorry for the late review. This is the best DC ff that I've ever read. The Mc is not evil but also not good, let's say he's in gray. The mc is not a villain, nor a hero, but he's a Thief. I love how this story progress too, the harem is built property, and the romance is here. The Mc is funny and his distractions. The Mc is not OP at the start too, he just cannot die, that's all, and i love how he use this to make it to the top. You all should try this so you can know how great this story is.
well, this is an ok novel for me. the writing is way better than most of fanfics in this site but plot is holding back. First of all there's no tension in the story as there're no risk involved for the mc.We all know he'll just breeze through with his cheat.You can argue other novels are the same but this mc's cheat does not work in a satisfying way. It's just explained as it worked because his cheat.This creates a bland story telling. There's some mystery about the main character and his power that intrigues me but that doesn't work for long. I reached 84 chapters and just reminded me of some wuxia novels with long chapters that feels more and more pointless reading them. I'll recommend this to people as a good slice of life read but not as a good fanfic.
First off I wanna say thank you author. The novel was great and enjoyable to read. I really liked your one piece novel. Which led me to read this novel. As I thought if the one piece ff was great. I wouldn’t have a problem with this one. Which was a good call I made. NOW FOR THE READERS. I am not a picky reader and wannabe alpha male. Lots of the hate readers I saw throughout. We’re dudes that kept calling mc a simp for talking to females. Then I look at their bio which says “no simps, cucks, or romance”. This giving me the type of info to know what type of community they attract to. I’m giving this a five star, so it doesn’t drop because of hate readers. If I actually had to review. It would still be a high 4.5 star. Dropping the writing quality. It was the most obvious problem to me as non picky reader. Not to bad where it is non readable. Just a few small mistakes every chapter. Which I am alright with since it is still readable. I recommend to anyone that doesn’t just cry or hate reads.